Recurring error/ Directing help plzzz


#1

Hey guys I need your help, I don’t know why it keeps on saying that there’s an error in my script. Here’s the part of the script:

    CAMERON
[NAME] I asked you out because I think you're an incredible human being.
We used to be very close, and I miss that.
I know I'm the one who chose to say goodbye in middle school,
And I wish I didn't.

    HAZEL
(Well everybody can change, even though he's been a massive douche and bully)
For the past 4 years).

choice “Forgive him” {

    HAZEL
Who am I to judge you? I guess we all deserve a second chance.

    CAMERON +1
Thanks [NAME] I knew you would understand. I'm doing my best to be a better man.
You know what let's start this thing all over again.

    HAZEL
What do you mean?

    CAMERON
Hey, I'm Cameron and you?

    HAZEL
I'm [NAME], nice to meet you Cameron.

    CAMERON
Pretty name for a pretty girl.

    HAZEL
I know right !

} "Keep my guard up "
Hey guys I need your help, I don’t know why it keeps on saying that there’s an error in my script. Here’s the part of the script:

    CAMERON
[NAME] I asked you out because I think you're an incredible human being.
We used to be very close, and I miss that.
I know I'm the one who chose to say goodbye in middle school,
And I wish I didn't.

    HAZEL
(Well everybody can change, even though he's been a massive douche and bully)
For the past 4 years).

choice “Forgive him” {

    HAZEL
Who am I to judge you? I guess we all deserve a second chance.

    CAMERON +1
Thanks [NAME] I knew you would understand. I'm doing my best to be a better man.
You know what let's start this thing all over again.

    HAZEL
What do you mean?

    CAMERON
Hey, I'm Cameron and you?

    HAZEL
I'm [NAME], nice to meet you Cameron.

    CAMERON
Pretty name for a pretty girl.

    HAZEL
I know right !

} "Keep my guard up "

    **HAZEL**     _--> right here it says "unexpected character HAZEL"  I tried to remove the name, same error you forgot to put the name, I put another name "unexpected character" I remove the entire line well they find another error in the next line saying unexpected character Cameron._ 

Listen Cameron, I can’t forget what you’ve done to me for the past few years.
Actions speak better than words. It will take time for you to regain my trust.

    CAMERON
Yeah you're right. I'm sorry.
We should get a brand new start.

    HAZEL
Why would we?

    CAMERON
You said it yourself, actions speak better than words. I really want to show you
That I changed.

    HAZEL
Cameron you were a bully and a massive jerk in high school.

    CAMERON
I know...

    HAZEL
Cameron, high school ended less than a month ago.

    CAMERON
I'm changing. I'm doing my best, but I can't do it alone
I need your help.

    HAZEL
I'll help you when I'll see some major changes in your life and attitude.

    CAMERON -1
You're right. Thank you for NOT believing in me.

    HAZEL
Stop being dramatic. It's not that easy to trust you again.
How do I know you're not going to crush me the way you did before?

    CAMERON
I-I-I don't know.

{

    HAZEL
You know what? Let's go somewhere else,
It'll help me to see if you can be a gentlemen in every kind of situation.

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[quote=“Venise, post:1, topic:87280, full:true”]
Hey guys I need your help, I don’t know why it keeps on saying that there’s an error in my script. Here’s the part of the script:

    CAMERON
[NAME] I asked you out because I think you're an incredible human being.
We used to be very close, and I miss that.
I know I'm the one who chose to say goodbye in middle school,
And I wish I didn't.

    HAZEL
(Well everybody can change, even though he's been a massive douche and bully)
For the past 4 years).

choice “Forgive him” {

    HAZEL
Who am I to judge you? I guess we all deserve a second chance.

    CAMERON +1
Thanks [NAME] I knew you would understand. I'm doing my best to be a better man.
You know what let's start this thing all over again.

    HAZEL
What do you mean?

    CAMERON
Hey, I'm Cameron and you?

    HAZEL
I'm [NAME], nice to meet you Cameron.

    CAMERON
Pretty name for a pretty girl.

    HAZEL
I know right !

} "Keep my guard up "

    **HAZEL**     _--> right here it says "unexpected character HAZEL"  I tried to remove the name, same error you forgot to put the name, I put another name "unexpected character" I remove the entire line well they find another error in the next line saying unexpected character Cameron._ 

Listen Cameron, I can’t forget what you’ve done to me for the past few years.
Actions speak better than words. It will take time for you to regain my trust.

    CAMERON
Yeah you're right. I'm sorry.
We should get a brand new start.

    HAZEL
Why would we?

    CAMERON
You said it yourself, actions speak better than words. I really want to show you
That I changed.

    HAZEL
Cameron you were a bully and a massive jerk in high school.

    CAMERON
I know...

    HAZEL
Cameron, high school ended less than a month ago.

    CAMERON
I'm changing. I'm doing my best, but I can't do it alone
I need your help.

    HAZEL
I'll help you when I'll see some major changes in your life and attitude.

    CAMERON -1
You're right. Thank you for NOT believing in me.

    HAZEL
Stop being dramatic. It's not that easy to trust you again.
How do I know you're not going to crush me the way you did before?

    CAMERON
I-I-I don't know.

{

    HAZEL
You know what? Let's go somewhere else,
It'll help me to see if you can be a gentlemen in every kind of situation.

HAZEL -> right here it says “unexpected character HAZEL” I tried to remove the name, same error you forgot to put the name, I put another name “unexpected character” I remove the entire line well they find another error in the next line saying unexpected character Cameron.

Listen Cameron, I can’t forget what you’ve done to me for the past few years.
Actions speak better than words. It will take time for you to regain my trust.

    CAMERON
Yeah you're right. I'm sorry.
We should get a brand new start.

    HAZEL
Why would we?

    CAMERON
You said it yourself, actions speak better than words. I really want to show you
That I changed.

    HAZEL
Cameron you were a bully and a massive jerk in high school.

    CAMERON
I know...

    HAZEL
Cameron, high school ended less than a month ago.

    CAMERON
I'm changing. I'm doing my best, but I can't do it alone
I need your help.

    HAZEL
I'll help you when I'll see some major changes in your life and attitude.

    CAMERON -1
You're right. Thank you for NOT believing in me.

    HAZEL
Stop being dramatic. It's not that easy to trust you again.
How do I know you're not going to crush me the way you did before?

    CAMERON
I-I-I don't know.

{

    HAZEL
You know what? Let's go somewhere else,
It'll help me to see if you can be a gentlemen in every kind of situation.

#2

CAMERON
[NAME] I asked you out because I think you’re an incredible human being.
We used to be very close, and I miss that.
I know I’m the one who chose to say goodbye in middle school.
And I wish I didn’t.

HAZEL
(Well everybody can change, even though he’s been a massive douche and bully for the past 4 years).

choice
“Forgive him” {

 HAZEL
Who am I to judge you? I guess we all deserve a second chance.

    CAMERON +1
Thanks [NAME] I knew you would understand. I'm doing my best to be a better man.
You know what let's start this thing all over again.

    HAZEL
What do you mean?

    CAMERON
Hey, I'm Cameron and you?

    HAZEL
I'm [NAME], nice to meet you Cameron.

    CAMERON
Pretty name for a pretty girl.

    HAZEL
I know right !

} "Keep my guard up "{

HAZEL
Listen Cameron, I can’t forget what you’ve done to me for the past few years.
Actions speak better than words. It will take time for you to regain my trust.

CAMERON
Yeah you’re right. I’m sorry.
We should get a brand new start.

HAZEL
Why would we?

CAMERON
You said it yourself, actions speak better than words. I really want to show you that I changed.

HAZEL
Cameron you were a bully and a massive jerk in high school.

CAMERON
I know…

HAZEL
Cameron, high school ended less than a month ago.

CAMERON
I’m changing. I’m doing my best, but I can’t do it alone.
I need your help.

HAZEL
I’ll help you when I’ll see some major changes in your life and attitude.

CAMERON -1
You’re right. Thank you for NOT believing in me.

HAZEL
Stop being dramatic. It’s not that easy to trust you again.
How do I know you’re not going to crush me the way you did before?

CAMERON
I-I-I don’t know.


}

 HAZEL
You know what? Let's go somewhere else,
It'll help me to see if you can be a gentlemen in every kind of situation.

#3

I didn’t get what was wrong :confused: sorry can you tell me because when I look at my script it’s just the same…


#4

HAZEL
I know right!

}“Keep my guard up”{

HAZEL
Listen Cameron, bla bla bla…

You are missing the part that I bolded :slight_smile:


#5

OMG Thanks!!! I’ve been struggling on that for a week!


#6

No worries!
Am glad to have helped :black_heart: