I have a script where I have a character wear an outfit but a boy spills soda all over her t-shirt therefore I give the reader the choice to lash out on him hjor accept his t-shirt but my gains aren’t working help please.
INT. CAFETERIA 2 - DAY with CAFETERIA TABLE at layer 10
&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 334 473 to 221% in 0
@overlay CAFETERIA TABLE shifts to -313 5 in zone 2
@overlay CAFETERIA TABLE scales to 2.722 2.722
&REAGAN spot 1.135 -9 194 in zone 2 and REAGAN faces right AND REAGAN is idle_sit_serious_loop and REAGAN moves to layer 1 and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA spot 1.056 -47 192 in zone 2 and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA faces right and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA is idle_sit_neutral_loop and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA moves to layer 2 and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA 3 spot 1.280 255 139 in zone 2 and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA 3 faces right and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA 3 is idle_sit_neutral_loop_rear and PHOTOGRAPHER EXTRA 3 moves to layer 3 and SARAH spot 1.280 198 63 in zone 2 and SARAH is idle_sit_anklescrossed_neutral_loop and SARAH faces left and SARAH moves to layer 4 and RED spot 1.512 93 -41 in zone 2 and RED moves to layer 14 and RED faces left and RED is sip_stemware_happy AND ALMA spot 1.483 234 -62 in zone 2 and ALMA is talk_phone_neutral_loop AND ALMA faces right and ALMA moves to layer 13
@add Episoda Can Cup to RED
#{
if (chose_day1_op1){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP1
} elif(chose_day1_op2){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP2
}
elif (chose_day1_op3){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP3
}
#}
@pause for 2
RED (sip_stemware_neutral)
(Man who new public schools had such shitty drinks.)
@speechbubble is 214 198 to 100% with tail_top_right
&ALMA faces left and RED is think_rubchin
ALMA
Excuse me?
&RED faces right and RED is react_gasp_dismayed and ALMA is react_scream_horror
@zoom on 519 539 to 133% in 0.5
#{
if (chose_day1_op1){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP1_SODA
} elif(chose_day1_op2){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP2_SODA
}
elif (chose_day1_op3){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP3_SODA
}
#}
@speechbubble reset
RED (react_mortified)
(Oh, | bold |shit!)
&ALMA is sigh_disappointed THEN ALMA is dustoff_neutral_loop
RED (talk_startled_neutral)
I’m so sorry.
@remove Episoda Can Cup from RED
ALMA
(This dude totally just spilled soda all over my shirt.)
choice
“UGH! What the actual fuck?”{
gain chose_MYT
readerMessage Red doesn’t like the way you reacted.
@RED -1
ALMA (talk_repulsed)
Dude, what the fuck!
&ALMA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
RED (talk_cup_angry)
Look, I said I was sorry, ok?
&RED is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
ALMA (talk_doubtful)
Whatever…Just get outta my way.
&RED is idle_argument_angry_loop
@ALMA walks to spot 1.483 -149 -68 in 0.5 and ALMA is walk_angry_loop and RED faces left
}
“It’s cool.”{
@RED +1
readerMessage Red, appreciates your respect.
gain chose_REDST
ALMA (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Listen, it’s fine don’t stress.
&ALMA is dustoff_neutral_loop
RED (talk_deny_neutral)
No, no please uh…I have a spare t-shirt in my locker if you want it?
&RED is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
@overlay BLUE BLUR create
&overlay BLUE BLUR opacity 0 in 0
@overlay BLUE BLUR shifts to -12 -68 in zone 2
@overlay BLUE BLUR scales to 0.782 0.782
@overlay BLUE BLUR moves to layer 12
ALMA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Yes, thank you so much.
&ALMA is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
RED (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Great try it on.
#{
if (chose_day1_op1){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP1_REDST
} elif(chose_day1_op2){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP2_REDST
}
elif (chose_day1_op3){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP3_REDST
}
#}
@RED moves to layer 11
&zoom on 640 383 to 185% in 0
@overlay BLUE BLUR opacity 1 in 0.5
@ALMA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop THEN ALMA is primp_neutral
@pause for a beat
&zoom on 493 531 to 133% in 0.5
@overlay BLUE BLUR opacity 0 in 1
@ALMA is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop and RED is flirt_coy and RED moves to layer 14
RED (talk_flirt_charming)
You look amazing, by the way...
&RED is flirt_shy
ALMA (talk_agree_happy)
[FIRSTNAME] [SECONDNAME].
&ALMA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
RED (talk_flirt_coy)
[FIRSTNAME], cute name, I’m Red. I just moved here so, hopefully you’ll show me around?
&RED is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
ALMA (talk_flirt_charming)
Thank you Red, and I’d love to give you a tour of the school.
&ALMA is flirt_shy
RED (talk_flirt_coy)
No problem, well I’ll see you around?
@RED is flirt_wink_happy THEN RED walks to spot 1.512 399 -46 AND ALMA is flirt_liftchin_receive_shy
ALMA (flirt_coy)
(Wow, he was cute..)
@ALMA faces right THEN ALMA walks to spot 1.483 -47 -62 in 3 AND ALMA does it while walk_neutral
}
@transition fade out white
#}
######################################### NEW SCENE #######################################################{
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
readerMessage Thank You @episodeaprilmeijune on Instagram for this school hallway template!
@zoom on 767 330 to 714% in 0
@cut to zone 3
@zoom on 160 284 to 100% in 0
@BG7 spot 1.370 276 -65
@BG7 moves to layer 4
@BG6 spot 1.379 187 -89
@BG6 moves to layer 4
@BG4 spot 1.154 108 -5
@BG4 moves to layer 2
@BG3 spot 0.623 73 295
@BG3 moves to layer 3
@BG2 spot 0.470 104 360
@BG2 moves to layer 1
@BG5 spot 1.793 29 -322
@BG5 moves to layer 4
@ALMA spot 0.290 135 432
@ALMA moves to layer 2
@BG8 spot 0.794 261 229 in zone 1
@BG8 moves to layer 1
&BG6 faces right AND BG6 starts talk_smile_happy_loop AND BG4 walks to spot 1.154 -69 12 in zone 3 in 2 AND BG4 does it while walk_neutral_offset_loop AND BG3 walks to spot 1.046 70 74 in zone 3 in 3 AND BG2 starts text_phone_neutral_loop AND BG5 walks to spot 1.793 34 -313 in zone 3 in 3 AND BG5 does it while walk_neutral_offset_loop AND BG7 faces left AND BG7 starts talk_neutral_loop THEN BG5 starts callout_neutral AND BG3 starts idle_bounce_happy_loop AND BG2 walks to spot 0.470 104 360 in zone 2 in 3 AND BG2 does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop THEN BG5 starts talk_phone_happy_loop AND BG8 starts text_phone_sad_loop
@ALMA stands screen center
if (chose_REDST){
if (chose_day1_op1){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP1_REDST
} elif(chose_day1_op2){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP2_REDST
}
elif (chose_day1_op3){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP3_REDST
}
}
if (chose_MYT){
if (chose_day1_op1){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP1_MYT
} elif(chose_day1_op2){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP2_MYT
}
elif (chose_day1_op3){
@ALMA changes into ALMA_DAY1_OP3_MYT
}
}
&zoom on 741 328 to 183% in 8
&ALMA walks to spot 1.730 120 -292 in zone 3 in 8 AND ALMA does it while walk_neutral_offset_loop
@pause for 3
@ALMA moves to layer 3
@pause for 2
@ALMA moves to layer 4
@pause for 2
@ALMA moves to layer 5
@pause for 1
@add Composition School Open Grey Black to BG4
@BG2 spot 0.506 197 364 in zone 2 AND BG2 faces right AND BG2 starts tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND BG4 starts read_book_open_neutral_loop
&pan to zone 1 in 6
&zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 6
@ALMA walks to spot 1.730 120 -292 in zone 1 in 6 AND ALMA does it while walk_runway_loop
&zoom on 3 415 to 318% in 3
@ALMA walks to spot 0.884 52 201 in zone 1 in 3 AND ALMA faces right AND ALMA does it while walk_neutral_rear THEN ALMA faces right AND ALMA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
@pause for 1
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