Revamped 1-3 Chapters ~ Would Love Feedback <3 ~

Hey gals and guys! After many weeks of procrastination I finally decided to revamp the first 3 chapters of my story. I was such a noob at writing back then but didn’t want restart the entire story from scratch. I wasn’t happy with the first few episodes because they were sooooo cringey (emphasis on the so). I would really like some feedback on the third, second or even first chapter. If you want I’ll happily read your story too x.

Thank you in advance!

Link to story ----->

The fight for survival is on. Even then can you deal with the love, friendships and enemies thrown your way?

It’s a zombie story btw :3


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