Hey gals and guys! After many weeks of procrastination I finally decided to revamp the first 3 chapters of my story. I was such a noob at writing back then but didn’t want restart the entire story from scratch. I wasn’t happy with the first few episodes because they were sooooo cringey (emphasis on the so). I would really like some feedback on the third, second or even first chapter. If you want I’ll happily read your story too x.
Thank you in advance!
Link to story -----> http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6581290760667136
The fight for survival is on. Even then can you deal with the love, friendships and enemies thrown your way?
It’s a zombie story btw :3