I kinda need some help with my story.
Can someone please review the story and tell me if you didn’t understand something, if you found any plot hole, or generally whatever you think of it? I need a very honest person to tell me exactly the parts that need correction.
I will read your story in return and give you a review too or a shoutout on my instagram, whatever you want.
I have 11 chapters so far, it would be great if you could read them all, ofc I’ll read 11 chapters of yours too. (And if you want, we can continue the review4read or shoutout or review till one of us complete the story (in order not to mess with the retention system) (eg. if you have 23 chapters when I publish the 12th chapter of my story you review it and I review the 12th ch of yours…))