Thank you so much for your interest in my feed, I had no clue it would take off like this lol
First off, and I feel like I say this a lot, but I really like your cover! I was really confused when I first saw it, but I guess that’s good because it makes me want to read to figure it out.
I also love your splashes, they’re very consistent and creative, they look really nice!
I don’t really understand the connection between the description of the story and the story yet, but I’ve only read the first episode so far, I’ll keep reading to find out !
I didn’t notice any directing errors, which was very impressive because you used some complicated directing commands.
I was shocked to see that your story only had 30 reads, it seemed like you should have so much more!
I also really like your plotline! It must have been hard to write about a relationship like the one between the main character and James, but I know people in relationships like theirs and I like how you brought light to the issue of abusive relationships.
My only criticism would be that your episode (or at least the first one) was very very long. I would suggest maybe putting less content in each of your episodes, and then you could have more episodes for your readers to read, and you wouldn’t have to write as much for each of your episodes. Just a suggestion :))
All in all, great story!
Is this your first story? I didn’t see any other stories on your profile, but it’s hard to believe this is your first story, you seem so experienced.
Anyway, I added your story to my favorites, I can’t wait to keep reading, keep up the good work!