Review for Review? <3

Hey guys! This is an R4R thread, so don’t comment if you JUST want the reads and don’t care for the review!!

I will read up to 3 episodes (1 if I’m not that interested in it), and provide you with a thorough review! (See examples below. )

PLEASE DONT GIVE ME A FALSE, OR VERY HEATED REVIEW!! I appreciate constructive criticism when it is said NICELY (like don’t bash my story, but don’t sugar coat it either!! Just say it nicely, don’t be a hater. ).

I WILL review your story ONLY WHEN YOU PM ME A REVIEW OF MINE!!!

Here’s the link:

Waiting list (will be done today):
None.

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My story isn’t published but could I just PM you the link and read the first two? I’m currently work on the third. And plus I’m bored so I’m just reading random stories anyway. :grin: :woman_shrugging:t4:

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My story isn’t either! Sure! :revolving_hearts:

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Twinsies! Virtual high five!

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I’d love to! What’s your stories link?

:blush:

Here is mine!

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Here’s my link!!

Do you want me to PM or post your review?:heart:

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You could post it! I don’t mind :see_no_evil:
How should I do yours? Pm or Post?

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Pm mine please!! And sounds good :heart:

Flight of Passion review:

~ LOVE the directing!
~ BABY ASHLYNN IS SO CUTE!!
~ unique story line!
~ I love the characters that you’ve created!
~ DAMN IM BLOWN AWAY BY THE DIRECTING AHHHHH!!
~ some speech bubble placements need improving (not that big of a deal though!)

OKAY THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE REVIEWED EVER!! :revolving_hearts::heartpulse:

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I would like to
Let me know when you will start

Here is mine
Title: A Criminal’s Love
Author: episode.vel (also IG name)
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Chapters: 11

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I can start it right now! My link is above ! :revolving_hearts:

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Ok
Ill start too

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A Criminals Love review:

~ use more full stops at the end of sentences (.).
~ spot directing can be improved (include more of it).
~ speech bubble placements can be improved as well.
~ use more zooms and overlays.

Other than that, the story line is very interesting! Loved the flashbacks.

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Feel free to check out mine :slight_smile:

My story: Thriller: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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I’m down :slight_smile:

Title: CYBER
Author: Vivi
Style: Limelight
Genre: Fantasy, Action
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Description: You are a gamer with no life. Harsh, but true. With a tournament coming up in your favorite VR game to play, CYBER, who knows what will happen?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4657138351603712
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@JannahJackson and @viviwrites ,

I’ll give you guys your reviews once I receive mine :heart:

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Do you want pm?

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Yes please!

Done I PM yu :grin::grin::grin::grin::grin::grin: I enioyed your story!!

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Thanks so much for the honest review!! I’m currently working on yours!! Do you want it PMd or in here? :revolving_hearts:

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