its not that is the problem I can take crutuqie fine. its I want opinions and know how I can improve. and people havent really givin me any at all. all i hear is th grammar part. which I make cler from the begining that the story is grammar cheked I will not do that before I am done but its the only thing they look at
its kinda like asking what people think of a picture I have taken and they only say you should frame it that is not the qutions asked