Hi there.
I’m new at this, first time I really use this forum aswell.
Will anyone read my new story and please give me criticism and leave me the feedback on my Instagram: @Lonse.episode.
Title: the assistant
Description: Hailey is desperate for a job and becomes an arrogant singer’s assistant. Will she be able to keep her job?
Genre: romance
Author: Lonse
Reads: 6
Style: limelight
Link: https://episode.app.link/h7cCBb61ZS
Title The Academy: King Hill
Description : A school filled with secrets, lies and deception. Will you come out unscathed or will you be dragged down with the lies.
Episodes 8
Story Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4925289943269376
Drama/Romance
R4R
By Shella DeRoi
Leave a heart if your interested and active in doing a R4R
I literally can’t deal with how amazing this story is. I have been looking for a story to read for ages. I think your meant glasses instead of classes. Anyway I love your story I wish they were longer and more of them. I’m going to leave some fan mail for you because your spot directing is also really good and that is what I value most when writing a story breathe. 
I was just really excited to write this.
Thank you so much! Haha. And yes glasses, not classes. 
I’m gonna read an review your story aswell, do you want me to give you feedback here or elsewhere? 
Hi! I would love to read your story!
Can you please read mine and tell me what you think about it?
Yes, of course. Where do you want the feedback?
You can give me feedback here
Name: MC: The Paper.
Genre: Romance\ Adventure
Synopsis: I read the paper, I read your book and it took me to all those places you wanted to meet.
I don’t know your name but I know your feelings. I promise I’ll find you.
This is my entry for the contest of Missing Connections!
Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Instagram: @larapstories
Link: https://episode.app.link/mRmxbzLPYR
Can you send me the link of your story for instagram? @alison_writes
I would also like to read your story!
Sure
Wow! I understand why you like spot direction - yours is flawless!! 
Its very well written and has a nice flow to it. And I absolutely love the twins! Haha. Can’t wait for more episodes.
I really don’t have any criticism to give. 
When you introduce the assassin, that was so cool! It’s funny, the characters are so well written and the story is amazing. You have a lot of cool effects and I don’t really have any criticism.
Hi, I’m up for a read for read!
Instagram: ellec.writes
Title: Dying Love
Genre: Romance/Drama
Brief Description: I loved you the moment I laid eyes on you. …But as they say, all good things must come to an end. Art scenes inside.
Cover:
Great. I Will read your story.
But you don’t want feedback? I would really love some criticism. 
I’m always open to feedback (:
I’ll definitely let you know what I think of your story!
Thank you! 
I Will read yours today or tomorow.
Hey!
I’ll read your story and review it for you, please could you read and review mine
My story
Title : The Royal Princess
Author : Mollie.stories
Episodes : 4 (Ongoing)
Genre : Romance
Style : ink
Description : Secrets, scandals, lies and romance. Olivia’s ordinary life is suddenly changed when it unravels that she’s Royalty. Can she rule and find her King? YOU decide! CC
Instagram : @mollie.stories
Episode : mollie.stories
Thank you so much x
Of course! I have two stories I need to read first, but then I’ll read yours.
Aww thank you so much 
Can’t wait to hear what you think x
