Review for review *or* just review my story!

Hello! I just recently published a new story for the AW contest and I’d love for someone to give me some constructive criticism! If you wanna do a review/review I’ll also give you feedback on your story in return!
Title: AW: Everything In Between
Genre: Mystery/Adventure/Romance
Summary: In 2025, heroes all around the world are being mysteriously killed and murdered. Will Lyric and the cocky superhero he hates be able to solve the case? [LGBT/MALE MC/DIVERSITY]

check out my story the strange world thank you

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Can you send me the link? It looks so interesting omg.

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Sorry I’m outside my home right now so I can’t go on my laptop to get the link but I will send it to you once I get back! :two_hearts:
Also @Eden.Justice yeah sure!

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thank you

2 Likes here’s the link!

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Okay, I read the first chapter of your story and… HOW THE FUCK DOESN’T THIS STORY HAVE AT LEAST 10K READS?

I literally have no words. You story is definition of “underrated”.

  1. A M A Z I N G directing. It’s so original and creative! The directing shows how many work is put into the story. I was so surprised when I saw how creative the directing is!
  2. Original theme. Male LGBTQ+ character is soo rare. I love the story. There are many superhero stories, but your definitely isn’t replecable.
  3. Including and not including CC at the same time. I loved the way you did that!
  4. Amazing writing! I have no words.

Your story is sure going to be on my reading list now. Count me as a new reader!


Hello, we could do a review for review if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 11 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment ?

Link :

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Oh my god thank you so much!! You just made my whole day oml :two_hearts: this means so much to me T H A N K. Y O U!!! :sob::revolving_hearts::revolving_hearts::revolving_hearts:!!!

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Yeah sure I’d love to do a review for review with you! I’ll fill out the link then dm you once I’m done reviewing your story :revolving_hearts:

Great thank you, your story is now on my list. I will let you know when I’m done with yours :blush::+1:t5:

Envoyé de mon iPhone

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you’re welcome hun!!:two_hearts:

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