Hello! I just recently published a new story for the AW contest and I’d love for someone to give me some constructive criticism! If you wanna do a review/review I’ll also give you feedback on your story in return!
Title: AW: Everything In Between
Genre: Mystery/Adventure/Romance
Summary: In 2025, heroes all around the world are being mysteriously killed and murdered. Will Lyric and the cocky superhero he hates be able to solve the case? [LGBT/MALE MC/DIVERSITY]
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check out my story the strange world thank you
Can you send me the link? It looks so interesting omg.
Sorry I’m outside my home right now so I can’t go on my laptop to get the link but I will send it to you once I get back!
Also @Eden.Justice yeah sure!
Okay, I read the first chapter of your story and… HOW THE FUCK DOESN’T THIS STORY HAVE AT LEAST 10K READS?
I literally have no words. You story is definition of “underrated”.
- A M A Z I N G directing. It’s so original and creative! The directing shows how many work is put into the story. I was so surprised when I saw how creative the directing is!
- Original theme. Male LGBTQ+ character is soo rare. I love the story. There are many superhero stories, but your definitely isn’t replecable.
- Including and not including CC at the same time. I loved the way you did that!
- Amazing writing! I have no words.
Your story is sure going to be on my reading list now. Count me as a new reader!
Hello, we could do a review for review if you want ?
But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form
Link below :
Here is the description of my story :
Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 11 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment ?
Oh my god thank you so much!! You just made my whole day oml this means so much to me T H A N K. Y O U!!! !!!
Yeah sure I’d love to do a review for review with you! I’ll fill out the link then dm you once I’m done reviewing your story
Great thank you, your story is now on my list. I will let you know when I’m done with yours
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you’re welcome hun!!