Review for review 💕

[GirlLykAnn]

Hey! Welcome to my thread
I will do review for review or read for read.

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Once you’ve read my story, comment yours below then mention if you’d like a review or just reads.

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Title: Cupid’s Arrow: Love Gone Wrong
Author: GirlLykAnn
Style: Ink
Genre(s): Drama, Romance and Fantasy
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5759154808684544

[MoniM]

I’d love to da a R4R

Here’s my story,

Title: Fantastical: Nature’s caprices
Author: Moni M.
Style: Ink
Genre(s): Fantasy, Romance, Comedy, Mystery mix
Episodes: 3

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Nature's caprices

[Aqaurius-kiss]

I’m up for a r4r
Title:The Heart Won’t Let Up
Author:Aquarius-kiss
Genre:Romance
Style:Ink
Episodes:6 (ongoing)
Description:Heavenly has been let down her whole life and although she would love to give and receive love, her heart just won’t let up. Will Ace change that or will it all crumble before them?
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6521658929840128

[sally.episode96]

I’m up for a read for read!

I’ll go check out your story now,

Here are my story details,

Title: A Husband’s Regret
Author: Sally Denno
Episodes: 6 and ongoing (weekly update)
Description: Wesley Sutherland suffers after losing his pregnant fiance, causing him to behave irresponsibly. What happens when his Grandpa forces him to get married?
Genre: romance/drama
Style: Ink
Instagram: @sally.writes96
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4681868246777856

Small cover:

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Big cover:

Thank you!

[ILoveToSing01231987]

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Story Title:A Dream Come True For Maxine
Story Description; In this story Maxine make a demo album in hopes of getting a record contract! Will Maxine’s dreams of becoming a professional singer come true find out by playing this story!
Number of episodes:4
Instagram:none
Published:Yes
My first story ever!

[Lizard]

I’m up for either a read for read or a review for review, you can choose! Here’s my story:

Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Genre: Drama
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 6 and counting
Style: Ink
My instagram: @lizard.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632

[GirlLykAnn]

Anyone else want to do review for review?

[ILoveToSing01231987]

Me I read all four chapters of your story that are available!

[GirlLykAnn]

Alright! I’ll read your story now

[GirlLykAnn]

Hey, I’ve staryed reading your story and so far I’ve noticed grammar errors… you started every single word in each dialogue with capital letters.

And I noticed that none of your characters are doing actions whilst they’re talking.

The directing could be better, there were a few things that looked slightly weird.

I wouldn’t recommend putting actions in dialogue

You put the coding in dialogue here:

More Directing errors

[ILoveToSing01231987]

I hope it gets better my story I will fix it from now on! BTW I love your story! It is fabulous!

[GirlLykAnn]

Thank you so much . By the way I’m going to keep editing my message with more feedback as I read

[ILoveToSing01231987]

Ok thanks so much for doing this for me!

[Days]

Hey there

Currently, my story is in the process of being edited - Episode 1 is fully edited so I’d like that to be the main focus of the review but if you could read a bit more and tell me what you think that’ll be great.

Would love to do a review for review, I’ll write my review soon

Title: Crossed Paths
Episodes: 5 so far (1 is fully edited)
Author: Dreamer

[GirlLykAnn]

Okay I’ll review the first episode

[Days]

Thanks

[episodeofnika]

Hey I’d love to do a review for a review!

Story name: Under Construction

Author name: Nika Tyler

Number of episode: 3 and ongoing

Style: INK

Instagram: @episodeofnika

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5265835262607360

[GirlLykAnn]

Hey @Days

I read the first chapter of your story and here’s my feedback:

-I loved the use of sound
-some of the translations didn’t really match…
-I like the use of the point system
-The amount of choices was good
-The directing was good
-I loved the humour
-I noticed a few layering issues
-When the other girl was drinking in the club it looked kinda weird cuz she had no cup so maybe add props.

Overall I enjoyed your story! I hope you keep on writing

[Days]

Thanks for taking the time to review my story

I’ll get to your story tomorrow

[Days]

I’ve read the first chapter and I really enjoyed it so far

• Brilliant humour - the sass pleases me so much hahaha
• Great usage of zooms and loved how you introduced yourself
• Plus point for diversity!!! (Love that this story has LGBT relationships )
• Your plot is engaging and really funny, I didn’t feel like I was dozing off - you had my full attention haha
• You’ve really made your characters believable and likable/unlikable (Mrs Alligator though ) from the offset

I loved the flashbacks and I am wondering: How did you make the imaginary boyfriend look like a ghost then disappear?

Awesome story and lovely directing - thanks for reading my story and thanks for the brilliant read