Review for review 😊


Hey guys! We have just wrote the first three chapters of our first ever story and we’re wondering what other people think of it, feel free to be brutally honest. If you read the first three chapters of our story and then dm us on instagram, we will then read your story and give you a review back :blush:

It should be:
Plot out of 10
Grammar/spelling out of 10
Cliffhangers out of 10
Characters out of 10
Directing out of 10
Choices out of 10
Overall out of 10

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Genre - Drama (also a comedy, romance and mystery)
Blurb - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Instagram - harly_episode


Hey, this is p nice of you guys. Can you check out my story? I’m reading yours right now.
Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Genre: Drama
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 8
My instagram: @lizard.episode


Of course, we will go read it now :blush: just dm us on instagram when you’re done, make sure to read all three chapters! Thanks so much xx


I will read yours!
Title: Fantastical the Mermaid
Author: Rahdia
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Plot: Kyle is a chef always seeking new ways to improve his cooking. One day while on his search his boat accidently crashes in the forbidden waters of Gaya. Where he meets the guardian of the sea: A mermaid!

Instagram: PrncssPscs


Title: The Man inside the Gang Leader
Author: tammyire
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Romance and Action
Style: Limelight
Plot Summary: The gang life is the only life that Blaire penelope has ever known. No-one really ‘falls in love’ so when the gang leader falls for her,she doesn’t know what to do.

& it’s also lgbt+ friendly meaning that you can choose your sexual preference. I’ll do read for read and review for review just comment. Thank you.


Sure :slight_smile: just dm me on instagram on reply on this when you’re done and I will read yours x


Yeah :slight_smile: if you can dm me on instagram or reply on this with the review when you’re done I’ll then read yours :blush:


If anyone wants an honest review this is my thread. You can request here or DM me on Instagram @Saasha_episode.


Hello my story is Upside Down I’d really appreciate it of you redears can review my story thank you!
Upside Down by MCMPLL


Hey! We will review your story after you’ve reviewed ours :blush: just send the review on this or to our Instagram harly_episode

Thank you x


No problem :slight_smile:


So I read your story
English isn’t my first language so I can’t really say something about it but I didn’t see any grammar mistakes that I know of
So grammar I think 10
Cliffhangers 8.5
Characters 9
Directing 9.5
Choices 7.8
Overall 9.8


Awww thank you so much :blush: I’ll do yours as soon as I can x


Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re the Queen of the Supernaturals. What’ll happen when you find out that your mate is your pack’s enemy, and your kidnapper? CC ChoicesMatter
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Instagram: emberpackepisode
NOTE: Please send review through PM.


I’m going to start your story tomorrow


Sure! Just send us our review on Instagram or on this and then we will do yours :blush:


sounds good!


Can I PM your review?


Hey. I’m starting your story today. When I’m done I’ll PM you the screen shots and my feeback.
I would love for you to give my story a review.
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.
Author: S_Unique
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: What happens when two shattered souls find each other? Will love prevail? +18


Of course! I’ll give yours a read as soon as I can :blush: