Hey guys! We have just wrote the first three chapters of our first ever story and we’re wondering what other people think of it, feel free to be brutally honest. If you read the first three chapters of our story and then dm us on instagram, we will then read your story and give you a review back
It should be:
Plot out of 10
Grammar/spelling out of 10
Cliffhangers out of 10
Characters out of 10
Directing out of 10
Choices out of 10
Overall out of 10
Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Genre - Drama (also a comedy, romance and mystery)
Blurb - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Instagram - harly_episode
Hey, this is p nice of you guys. Can you check out my story? I’m reading yours right now. Title: Over Before You Know It Author: Lizard Genre: Drama Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it? Number of Episodes: 8 My instagram: @lizard.episode Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632
I will read yours!
Title: Fantastical the Mermaid
Author: Rahdia
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Plot: Kyle is a chef always seeking new ways to improve his cooking. One day while on his search his boat accidently crashes in the forbidden waters of Gaya. Where he meets the guardian of the sea: A mermaid!
Title: The Man inside the Gang Leader
Author: tammyire
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Romance and Action
Style: Limelight
Plot Summary: The gang life is the only life that Blaire penelope has ever known. No-one really ‘falls in love’ so when the gang leader falls for her,she doesn’t know what to do.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5525068051775488
& it’s also lgbt+ friendly meaning that you can choose your sexual preference. I’ll do read for read and review for review just comment. Thank you.
So I read your story
English isn’t my first language so I can’t really say something about it but I didn’t see any grammar mistakes that I know of
So grammar I think 10
Cliffhangers 8.5
Characters 9
Directing 9.5
Choices 7.8
Overall 9.8
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re the Queen of the Supernaturals. What’ll happen when you find out that your mate is your pack’s enemy, and your kidnapper? CC ChoicesMatter
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode
NOTE: Please send review through PM.
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Hey. I’m starting your story today. When I’m done I’ll PM you the screen shots and my feeback.
I would love for you to give my story a review.
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.
Author: S_Unique
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: What happens when two shattered souls find each other? Will love prevail? +18
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5150158950367232
just dm me on instagram on reply on this when you’re done and I will read yours x
