Review my chapter 1&2 (unpublished) 💕 *Closed*

So I have only written my first two chapters and I’m about to move onto my third but, before I do that I want feed back on whether my chapters are too short, don’t flow and parts wether I should change in the case it doesn’t make sense.

thank you💕

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I would love to view it! I’m more of a brutally honest kinda person, but just send it too me!

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thank you I will PM the link now

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