Review my demo story!


#1

This is my very first story!

Fair warning, it’s a very unusual reading style.

WARNING: This story is LGBTQ and Boyxboy!

Title: Choices (DEMO)
Author: Alan Richard
Episodes: 3 (Only first episode is the demo. The other two are blank.
Genre: Interactive, romance, mystery, adventure, thriller
Style: Limelight
Description: This demo is an LGBTQ story that takes direct inspiration from decision making games such as Until Dawn, The Walking Dead, and Life is Strange to name a few. Step into Nate Bradey’s shoes as his entire fate lie in your hands. Your decisions dramatically alter how his life will play out. What fate will you give him?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5797973347139584

If you want me to read your story and give feedback then I would be more than happy to return the favor!


#2

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#3