Review my demo story!

This is my very first story!

Fair warning, it’s a very unusual reading style.

WARNING: This story is LGBTQ and Boyxboy!

Title: Choices (DEMO)
Author: Alan Richard
Episodes: 3 (Only first episode is the demo. The other two are blank.
Genre: Interactive, romance, mystery, adventure, thriller
Style: Limelight
Description: This demo is an LGBTQ story that takes direct inspiration from decision making games such as Until Dawn, The Walking Dead, and Life is Strange to name a few. Step into Nate Bradey’s shoes as his entire fate lie in your hands. Your decisions dramatically alter how his life will play out. What fate will you give him?


If you want me to read your story and give feedback then I would be more than happy to return the favor!

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: