I am currently working on an entry into the Magicka contest! I’ve already started on the second episode, but I would feel MUCH more confident if someone could review JUST the first chapter and let me know if my story is confusing or hard to follow. If it is, I would love some constructive feedback! I just need another pair of eyes to review my work. Thank you!
It’s called “Magicka: Secret Window.”
Here is the link: