Review my first story ? 3 episodes (ink)

I just published my first story, it’s called “The Waitress”.
I’d be happy about some feedback and tips, especially because of my english skills :sweat_smile:

Story Title: The Waitress
Author Name: Yuma
Style: Ink
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: You think you’re a normal girl, but what happens when a new job leads you into a new life with secrets, danger and much more? Read the story to find out! [CC] Choices matter.
Instagram Name: @yuma.episode

If you submit your story here we will be sure to give you some feedback:)