Review my story please!

Hey so I’m new to the lovely world of episode writing so I tried it out for myself! ~ Constructive Criticsm is welcome, but please be easy as this is my first and I am new!


This is an adventure story set just after college where there are a group of girls who you don’t know a lot of stuff about. But they are sneaky and unpredictable. They all work in a group called The Sorority.

Name~ Legenda
Author~ natalie.keira
Genre~ Mystery or action
Episodes~ Only one so far
Quick Description~ Welcome to The World of The Sorority but then again they aren’t your average everyday sorority, so what could they all possibly be hiding…

Hello, we could do a review for review if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment?
Link :


Of Course!
I’m already in love with just looking at it

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Awwwww :smiley:

I could look at your story and give you some feedback (first I will only start with the first episode and then continue if you want me to when you publish). It would be lovely if you could look at my story and give me feedback on it :slight_smile:
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Genre: drama
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 7
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?

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Hi Girl!

If you’d like we could do read for read :slight_smile:
I am down to send you a review as well, you don’t have to review mine back if you don’t want to.
Please let me know if you’d like that :slight_smile:

Here’s mine below:

Story Name: Friends & Lovers (yeah not very creative but I’ve never been good with titles)
Author: Mia_Cee
No. of Chapters: 4 (It’s ongoing)
Style: Ink
Genre: Drama
Description: Getting through HS is never easy, especially when you’re known as LOSER LEXIE. Can it all change senior year? Will she choose BFF Jamie or soccer god Blake? Customize CCs INK - I’ve always wanted to do an HS story a la Gossip Girl soooo…
Warning: Strong Language and some Mature Themes
Notes: Full Character Customization for all leads
Some choices may affect the storyline, but only by a little, since the main plot will stay the same
Most Choices decide how the characters react
Kinda like reading a book

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Hey, :grin:

Do you want to do R4R with me, too? :slight_smile:
If yes, I would love to add your story to my favs. list - it´s ony my topic. I have a few R4R to do at first, but I will come back to you before I´ll start reading your Story :slight_smile:
And of course - Screenshot after reading as proof <3

Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Romance (and a little comedy, too.)
Style: Ink
Danger. Passion. Love.
The Laugh-Twins are the complete opposites of what you would call normal. Just let yourself be taken to the world of May and Julien - the Trouble Twins.


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