Review my story

Dear all,

Please again review my story, I have updated first episode as per review from @LI05 and @Apes.
Thank you very much for your reviews and trying to improvise as you suggested.

My Story - I am Dating A Liar
Updated Episode - One
Description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.



Hi Sandy,
Would you be interested in doing a review for review? I’m very thoughtful in my reviews and provide screenshots proving that I actually read at least 3 chapters :slight_smile:

Give me details of your story.
I will read atleast three episode.

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: