Review my story :)?

Hey, I’m re-writing a story I did last year (not published) which I decided to discontinue because I wasn’t bothered to continue it lol. I’d appreciate some constructive feedback :slight_smile: You don’t have to read my story if you don’t feel like it.
(Don’t do episode 4 it only has the intro)

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r4r?

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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