I think it’s good! It hits the story’s plot to the point
Here are some suggestions though:
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Anna is bounced around foster homes all her life until she meets Jasmine and Allen. Can they change her mind and save her heart from another break?
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Anna can’t keep a home, all she’s ever known is foster care. It’s not going to be any different with Jasmine and Allen. Or so she thought…
Also I think the title is way too generic in my opinion
Here are some title suggestions from my story title shop, if you’re interested
- Empty Promises
- Penny For Your Tears
- Ends And Beginnings
- In Faith She Fell
- Feel Again
- Probably For Sure