Review Needed! Story: Family

I think it’s good! It hits the story’s plot to the point :slight_smile:

Here are some suggestions though:

  • Anna is bounced around foster homes all her life until she meets Jasmine and Allen. Can they change her mind and save her heart from another break?

  • Anna can’t keep a home, all she’s ever known is foster care. It’s not going to be any different with Jasmine and Allen. Or so she thought…

Also I think the title is way too generic in my opinion :thinking:
Here are some title suggestions from my story title shop, if you’re interested :hugs: :blossom:

  • Empty Promises
  • Penny For Your Tears
  • Ends And Beginnings
  • In Faith She Fell
  • Feel Again
  • Probably For Sure
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