Review needed :)

Hi, so I made my story and it’s doing okay, but I don’t know what’s good and bad about it. If anyone could please tell me what they think is good, and things I could do to improve, it would be massively appreciated. You can click the link or find it on episode, “But…was it suicide?”

Holly xo

Hi Holly! I just read the first episode of your story and it’s great! I can’t wait to keep reading more. It’s so suspenseful. I’ll definitely share your story. I’d love it if you read my story I Love You to Death. It’s new and I could really use some feedback. You’re an amazing writer! :grin: