I am looking for some reviews- with appreciation and constructive criticism, so that I can improve my story. Note: Please write the review here in the replies.
Title: Her Stolen Dream
Genre: Fantasy/Drama
What to expect:
Description: A royal engagement between Chloe and Liam goes wrong when the king is killed. Now, Chloe must protect the prince and kingdom. What will happen when she’s stuck with the prince?
I think you should give people a little more information to gain their interest in doing a review like:
Title
Link
Genre
Features: (like games, choices matter, (if it’s romance) multiple LI or 1 LI (which some prefer), CC or limited CC etc )
Description: Since the Forums don’t have a character count, you can give a more thorough descriptive and full description of what it is that your story is about.
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I think those details would help you find more people willing to help you out Good luck and @Catniss you’re so nice
Hey I just wanted to lyk that I finally finished. Honestly sorry for taking so long stuff happened and I lost motivation for a good amount of stuff but here’s my review for you.
Some of the text below will spoil the story for those who haven’t read it…
I like it and think it’s a interesting plot just imo the first chapter I didn’t see how it tied in with it until the very end or the 2nd chapter . I would maybe suggest maybe starting it off with the scene of the king fainting and maybe the moms fainting then bring it back to where you show Liam and the MC’s relationship with like _ day/hours before or smth like that . I would also suggest showing when you get points or lose points . As well as at the end or beginning or both a option to show how many points you have earned outta _ you could have .
Hope it helps out @AdriGarai09 ! If you have any questions about anything feel free to ask in this thread or pm .
Good luck and 