Review of Stories (temporarily closed)


Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story!
Episodes: 4 (more to come)
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:


Name: Prominent Gift
Author: Gia Morina
Genre: Fantasy/Werewolf/Romance/Drama
Description: Kidnapped at 16, Piper finally escapes after three years. She finds herself in the home of the soon to be Alpha King. What happens when her kidnappers come looking for her? How long can the Alpha King keep her protected?
Number of Episodes: 4

Thank you :heart:


Hi there,

I read the first 2 episodes of your story and I really like it so far.
Plot: The plot is pretty intriguing. Nothing substantial has happened yet, so I am excited to find out what happens behind the bookcase.
Directing: I thought that the directing was good. I did notice that in one scene the MC was sitting on the bed and she was significantly smaller than the bed.
Grammar: I noticed that there were many sentences lacking commas and apostrophes. There was also a spot in the story where a character said “of” when I think they meant "off."
Additional: Overall I thought I was a good story.


Hi. I would love to check your story out when you are done with it.

Title: Mei
Author: Manna
number of episodes: 4 Episodes
Small Description: It was almost as if he was waiting for me to come to his rescue, a trap set for me. Instead he fell into mine…


Title of Story: Family Values by: Danny

Genre: Drama
Episodes: 3
Description: “Secrets. Betrayal. Tragedy. The Baldwin family was tight knit- but all it takes is one stray thread to unravel it all.” A family as close as ever- with secrets no one could imagine. When things begin to slowly unravel before them, will your bond with them still be as strong? Or will you break under all the pressure?



Hi! I would appreciate an honest review <3

Form: Ink
Username: ltxo
Author Name: Lara
Story Title: From Girly to Manly
Genre: Romance/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Ever since the new queen’s reign the kingdom has been divided. There is a barrier between men and women. What happens if you have to pretend to be a boy, but then start to fall for the guy you deceived? [CC]
Published: Yes, Episode 6 so far


Thank you!! <3


Hello, if you’re still doing review of stories, I’d be thankful if you can check out mine.
Title: Rouge Storm
Chapters: 3 (more coming up)
Style: Ink
Author: B612 resident
Description: A girl names Katherine ran away from somewhere. She made it to a new places, had a new life, and had new friends. Just when she thought everything is settled after more than a year, something’s about to change.

I’m new to this thing and it’s my first story so I already know the directing is bad, like really bad :sweat_smile: still, I’d like some more reviews to help me improve. Thanks for your time.


A review would be amazing <3

Title: ** H & V : In Too Deep**
Author: Sweet Stories
Style: Lime (CC)
Episodes: 4 (on going)
Genre: Romance, Mystery, Fantasy
Details: You move to Miami to start your new life and get caught up in a dangerous situation that causes you to cross paths with a mysterious stranger. And boy is he more than what you bargained for;)


This is my first story I published and these are the details for it, I hope you guys could read it.
I only published 6 episodes, but I hope you like them so far if you give it a read.
Author: feck.b
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?

This story also uses East London slang.


Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: Romance
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories
Forum: Joqueena
Episodes: 3
Questions: Story too long?
Is the plot interesting enough?
Should I allow readers to generate name/ create avatar
Is the story set up good for the reader to understand
Additional notes: Hello people this is my first story on episode so if you have any questions comments concerns and most of all advice I’m all ears thank you
Link: Art of Desire


Title: A Taste Of Summer
Author: Nicole.B
Small Description: You and your friend’s get out of school for the summer! But boy do you know this summer is gonna be wild! (Drama,Romance,Comedy)
Style: INK
Published: No
Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy MAINLY DRAMA
THAT’S ALL! :smile:


Can you close this thread? It’s not letting me edit it. Thanks



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