I need a very honest review on a draft of mine, including things I need to work on and things I could use to improve the quality of it.
Feel free to point out any mistakes or anything that’s bothering you in it .
There’s only one episode and it’s not completely finished, I started writing it yesterday out of boredom but now i think i want to take it seriously.
(it’s ink)
The link:
Ill read this!
I’ll PM you when i’m done!
sure, thank you! xx
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Apologies if this comes off across as rude, but when do you think you’ll be able to review my story.
Not trying to rush you or anything.
I will be able to Its just a glitch on my end where I’m having trouble opening it.
If you want someone else to review your story thats okay too 
Oh ok, don’t worry about reviewing it if the glitch causes u too much trouble. xx
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