Review on my first story Panic


Hey everyone
It would be really helpful if someone could review my first ever story Panic and help me make it better​:revolving_hearts: And if you had any ideas after you read it you could DM me on insta my account is ellie.marie_episode :revolving_hearts:
Ps I made the story in mobile creator and will continue to make it in mobile creator so I can only do limited things x


Do you still need someone to review and offer feedback on your story?


Yes it would be great thanks :revolving_hearts: @al3igh