Review Please? (Need help)



I finished 5 episodes from my story and I need someone to take a look.
English it’s not my 1st language and I think I have lots of grammar mistakes.
Also, any suggestion about everything else, I would love to hear about.

BUT, before everything else, HOW CAN I SHARE TO YOU MY STORY? :thinking:
Gee! I feel like a looser right now! :sweat:


Right so today I have a handful of stories to read but I can try and help out with grammar later on today if you want?


Thanks a lot!:heart:

I think chapters 4 and 5 can’t be seen because I need some backgrounds approvals.