Review/proofread my story please x

Hi! I’ve just released my story, but I need opinions on it! So would anyone be willing to read it for me please, and pm me feedback? :slightly_smiling_face:

Please lmk if you can!!

Description/summary: After finally running away, she finds herself in the arms of an old flame. He’s determined to restore what’s been broken. But is that really possible when their past is closeby?

Link: Episode Writer Portal

Thank you so much!! :heartbeat:

Bump :smiling_face_with_tear:
Need more people :see_no_evil:

People may feel more inclined to help, if you added the story summary to your post. :blush:

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Bumppp :stuck_out_tongue:


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