Review/Read your stories?

Does anyone want me to read their stories and then talk about them on Insta?

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aaaa i’d love this! i don’t have an insta for myself so if you did it on yours it’d help me a lot! thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS

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Thanks, I’ll read it tomorrow.

I’ll create an insta highlight and post some screenshots if you would like me too? :slightly_smiling_face:

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i’d love that! thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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You’re welcome. :slightly_smiling_face:

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Ok I’ll read it tomorrow.

Would you like me to post it on my insta highlights?

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I’d be great if you could read it and tell me what you think :slight_smile:

Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 18 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

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Ok I’ll read it tomorrow. Should be interesting I’ve never read ink before.

Would you like me to post some things about it on Instagram highlights?

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yes, that’d be really nice of you! :slight_smile:

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Ok, do you have an Instagram account?

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yes, @dreamer.episode

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Ok thanks! :slightly_smiling_face:

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Hi I have just finished my first episode of my story is it ok if u have a look at it?

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Yes, I’d be more than happy too! :slightly_smiling_face:


Episode 2 I’m just going to start making it

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Ok would you like me to leave reviews of it on my Insta?

I don’t have Instagram so if its ok just tell me what you think of it on here plz

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Sure!

Ok so I read the first chapter and I thought it was very interesting. I would read chapter two.

The two main things I would change are:

  1. When they talk their mouths don’t move. Is there a reason for this? Because if their supernatural my mind was thinking maybe they talk telepathicly.

  2. Why do they walk in opposite directions for lunch? And when they go to class. And when they leave to do homework. And when they go into the house. And when they see nick in the house.

Besides these two things I really liked it.

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I do it on the app as I can’t code so I don’t know how to fix the walking bit but that’s for your input