Review Story 'The Distance Between Us'

Hey everyone! I just published a story and would really like to get it out of there. I would love if someone could review it and tell me what they think in the comments. Constructive criticism is welcome!!
Love,
Katherine

‘All her life, Katie has pushed people away. However, when Katie meets Leon, her world changes forever. Can she learn to forget her past and finally forgive herself?’

It’s a story about redemption, coming-of-age, and finally forgiving yourself through the love and support of others.

Title: The Distance Between Us
Genre: Drama
Author: Katherine <3
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6297975895818240

Thanks!

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