Hi guys!! I want to publish my story soon but I’d love to get some opinions on my first 5 chapters. If anyone were able to review the first few chapters I’d be super grateful!!
Couple things to note:
-I have not yet added sounds/intro/outro to chapter 4-5 (planning on doing it today.)
-I write in the British English so some words will be spelled differently to American English (i.e: customise/realise/behaviour/saviour/neighbour,… and probably many more.)
-Because the story is not published yet, if anyone wants to help I’ll pm them a link to my story.
I hope someone can find the time and energy to do it and thank you in advance!
It’s a romance taking place in a fantasy world.