Review unpublished story


#1

So I’m currently writing a story, I’m only on the first bit of the first chapter, but I’d love to know somebody else’s opinion on it so far.

Thanks :confused:
If anyone replies I’ll put the link up


#2

Sure I’ll read it :slightly_smiling_face:


#3

I’d appreciate honest feedback :slight_smile:
Also I was just in the middle of writing so a bit at the end is probably messy and unfinished

Hope the link works


#4

Ok, I’ll read it now :grin:

My only suggestion before reading the story is the title. There is already an extremely popular story called Adrenaline by Evil Ebonni. There are many stories with the same name but it’s always best to stand out.


#5

Oh yeah that’s 100% a temporary name :sweat_smile:


#6

Do you need a cover for your story


#7

I will, but I’m going to decide whether it’s a story worth continuing


#8

Okay If you do need a cover go to Making cover art And splashes (1-30 minutes)(Free)(open)


#9

I’m gonna go read your story now


#10

Ooh thanks :smiley:


#11

Your welcome


#12

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile:


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