Review your stories!


#1

Hey guys! I want to review your stories! I will read five episodes max of your story and give you a detailed honest review! I may read more episodes if I really like it! I will be picking three of my favorite stories to feature on my Instagram! And my favorite one will be promoted in the next episode of my story!
The rules:
You must read 5 episodes of my story and send screenshots in order to qualify.
My story is Unwanted Memories.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6664136482750464
I’m very passionate about helping others out and encouraging writers!
Please fill out the google docs form and comment done once you have submitted it!
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSflSQq47yTcTiq4yB7wWbswKc6-rFMmDRRZb4jDQmuWXrDXsQ/viewform?usp=pp_url
I can’t wait to read your stories!


#2

Hello !!! This is my first story on Episode :blush:
I would like it if you read it and I’ll read yours :slight_smile:

Thanks :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy
Style : Ink
Completed : No (I wrote 8 episodes) :slightly_smiling_face:
Customization : No but it stills fun to read!
Read4Read : Yes (give me the link)
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160

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#3

Okay! Please send screenshots of my story and I will begin your review!


#4

#5

No problem!!


#6

This is mine:
Title: Shape Shifting Madness
Author: Dasha
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6006937021972480


#7

I will read your story rn!


#8

Okay!! Just send screenshots. That’s how I’m going to order you guys according to who sends screenshots first! And thank you!


#9

Hello. I don’t mind. Here is my info. Be honest.

Title: Agents Of SPECTRUM
Genre: Adventure
Author: Andrew (Drew) Jones
Chapters: 6 published with more on the way.
Description: A young lady is recruited by a government agency, and her life is changed forever.
Instagram: andrewjones.episodes
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5075535578005504


#11

This is really nice of you! Here’s my story, I hope you like it:

Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Genre: Drama
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 7
Style: Ink
My instagram: @lizard.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632

I’ll send over the screenshots really quick, don’t worry about it


#12

I know we already did read for read, but still here you go.:slight_smile:


Here’s the details to my story:
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5150158950367232


#13

Ok here are the screenshots, send me screenshots of my story when you’re done reading it too.


I also filled out the form.


#14

This is my personal opinion. This review is not meant to hurt or offend the author only to provide constructive criticism and insight.
I noticed a few things about your story right off the bat. It’s very unique. I don’t think I’ve seen any stories quite like this one. The plot is very well defined in the story and the reader understands what’s going on from the get go. I think you portray the best friend well. The only thing is I think you should spend more time developing the mc. What I mean by that is show more of what is going on inside MCs head. Maybe go into narrator mode with her thoughts. Like what is she really feeling when her best friend says she wants to commit suicide. This will help the reader connect better with the characters and the story! But it’s merely a suggestion. You’re directing was good. I noticed some minor errors but nothing major. There was a couple grammatical errors but that can be easily fixed. Overall I did enjoy your story as it is something different and interesting!


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#16

Thank you for your review! I know this is going the extra mile, but can you tell me where some of the grammatical errors are? I didn’t notice any while going over the script :0


#17

I’ll have to look back at it but yes I’ll tell you


#18

Where you said “There is no guilt to a corpse.” Should be “There is no guilt from a corpse”. Or “A corpse doesn’t feel guilt” the best friend says something like “light it up a little” in the first episode. Should be “lighten up a little” there’s nothing that misspelled it’s just the way things are worded.


#19

Gotcha, thank you so much!


#21

Hey everyone!
I’d like to read my story called Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling here.
Below you can find the information you need to try it out.

Author: Mona K
Story Title: Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Comedy
Description: Cathyln is constantly picked on by her peers. Boys make fun of her and her “friends” make her do errands for them. Revenge her peers, betrayers and what if guy changes or not?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4830482803589120
Instagram: @monak.episode

Please make sure to follow me on Instagram to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!
I’m up for reading for reads as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please! :slight_smile: :two_hearts:

@Caitlynlynn0919 What’s your Instagram name? I must send you on Instagram DM after my reviews and passes :slight_smile:


#22

It’s epy.unwantedmemories