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Title: Break Down My Walls
Author: @moonlight123.episode
Genre: Action
Style: Ink
Description:You have your walls up. And no one ever comes in. But when you join a rebel gang, you feel attracted to the handsome leader. Can he melt your heart? Love, danger, lust awaits…
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4509103137619968
thank you for doing this I’ll read your story soon and send screenshots :slight_smile:

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Miss averys little secret
Ongoing (10 eps)
Avery has been one thing her whole life, her past. What happens when ig all comes rushing back? Will her secret be told? Will the people she loves trust her?
Ig: episode.hina

This is my personal opinion. This review is not meant to hurt or offend the author, only to provide constructive criticism. I love your story! The plot is very unique and well written! From the first few lines I was already hooked. The way you portray your characters is amazing. Your narration is poetic and beautiful. It really connected me to the characters emotions and the story! Your directing was spot on. Your grammar was fantastic. The only thing I could say is that the speech bubble sometimes blocked the characters. Other than that there’s nothing else that could’ve been done better. I can’t wait to read more! Please don’t stop writing!

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thank you so much and I just learned how to fix the speechbubbles lol :joy::sweat_smile:

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Thanks! Just send me screenshots of my story and I will get started on yours!

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Title: Rich Man Poor Woman
Author: Susu&Juju
Episodes 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Mystery and Drama
Style: Limelight
Plot Summary: You’re taken in by a rich family. Trouble is, you hardly have any recalls of your real family. That is, until your memories start to come back…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334066549620736
Read for Read: Yup.

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Title: To New Beginnings
Author: Bunny
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 4 (More coming soon)
Description: Bella has always been the nice child in the family, but as soon as she hit college she had another thing coming for her. Through pregnancy and drama join Bella in her crazy journey.

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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5001140418248704

Just send me screenshots of my story and I can get started on yours.

Just send me screenshots of my story and I can get started on yours!

Ok

Can you give me the link again so I can read it

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6664136482750464

Here is proof I read some of your story.

I send you on instagram DM :slight_smile:

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