Review your story (HONEST)

Haii I am Alex
I would love to read your stories!
There for I made a HONEST review thread no story is bad!
You have to tell This about your story before I review it:
How many episodes I have to review: max(3)
Cover picture:
Link to the story:
Additionel notes:

What I look at when I am reviewing your story:
-first impression
-tips and overall thought

The rating will be from 1 to 10 !!
Can’t Wait to read your stories ! :wink:

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Title: Oblivious
Author: The_saminator
Genre: Comedy
Description: When socially awkward Leanna catches the eye of equally awkward Kai things can’t get more awkward, can they?
3 episodes please

There is no sound, the selection sucks.

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Name: Retrace
Genre: Mystery. is where I placed it. but honestly, I have no idea. maybe drama
style: ink
description: mc’s mom has been shot and is in a coma. follow her as she tries to contact her dad. while listening to the story of how her parents meet. he was the son of a mafia boss and her an undercover cop. it is two stories in one

note: no need to mention my grammar. I know already it is not good. everyone has told me that I have missed some punction marks and capital letters. I am not gonna change it. I am already doing everything I can.

Hey! I would be interested! :slight_smile:

This is mine:
Title: A dangerous game (Limelight,CC)
Author: Shanen Ricci
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance/Fantasy
Chapters: 4 ( a lot will be soon coming haha)
Synopsis: Elena went against the man known as “The Devil himself”. He is cursed. Only her love can save or destroy him. Will she be able to resist his charm or will she lost her soul to him?

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ahhhh i’d love a review! thank you so much!

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters to Review: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

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Title: Video Game Champion
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Action
Style: Limelight
Description: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?
How many episodes I have to review: max(3): 3

Additional notes: The story has mini games

Title: Growing Pains
Author: epy_jaz
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Enter the world of Jacalyn Tate. Be there with her through her ups and downs, goods and bads. Will you help keep her afloat, or will you help your drown
How many episodes I have to review: 3
Cover picture: Temporary

Link to the story:
Additionel notes: This is my first ever story, so all feedback is accepted. I already understand there’s no choices or cc right now but please stay tuned for future episodes I have a lot in store for you, FOLLOW ME ON INSTAGRAM FOR UPDATES

Title: The Princess Of Fiore
Author: inkkee
Genre: Romance
Style: INK
Description: The story follows an 18 year old princess whose life got turned upside down on the night of her 18th birthday. What happened on that night? What will happen once she finds herself falling in love with a non royal boy?
How many episodes: 3

Additional notes: This is my first story so keep that in mind when reading, thanks for this thread and thanks if you’ll be willing to read and review mine

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Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Liyah
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: alana. a party girl, trying to navigate her way through life.
follow alana and her best friends through this crazy journey.
cc, scandal, desire and choices!
Episodes: 4 out. more coming soon.

Additional notes: Looking for ways to improve

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MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author: Dr.Smile

Thank you so much!

Title: Tied Together
Author: Molly
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Sydney has it all but what happens when her magia life takes it all away?
How many episodes I have to review: 3
Cover picture: don’t have one here
Link to the story:

@AlexVale1 Thank you for this! I would love a review from you :blush:

Title: Twisted
Author: Empress
Genre: Mystery/Crime/Romance (a little)
Style: INK
Was I naive… or guilty? Honest… or a liar? Maybe you can be a better judge of it than me. But listen to this story carefully. It’s quite… Twisted.

How many episodes I have to review (max 3): 3
Cover picture:

Link to the story:
Additional notes: I understand that you probably are reading only 3 chapters for each story because you have to read other stories as well, but if you like my story and you get time, I would love it if you continued reading it :blush:
Thank you again!

Title: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Mystery/Thriller/Horror
Style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? FullCharacterCustomization
Episodes to review: 3


Hey, thank you for your help, time and effort. I’d like to as for a review :blue_heart:

:radio_button:Title: To the stars & further
:radio_button:Author: fatima
:radio_button:Genre: romance
:radio_button:Style: LL
:radio_button:Story description: You are sexy, rich, smart and desired by every single man. Mark, the only one who will love you unconditionally. But how strong his love will be in front of your past?
:radio_button:3 episodes
:radio_button:Notes: English is not my first language, but I speak it most of the time.
Link of story:

Title: AENA
Author: EFPrince
Genre: Fantasy/World Adventure
Style: LL
Description: Find and destroy the AENA, before it’s too late. But what is the cost of saving the world from the AENA’s power?
How many episodes I have to review: 3 please
Cover picture:

Link to the story:
Additional notes: No sound, but am considering using it in future.

Title: Am I Different?

Story uses sounds
Authors: Olivia and Mia
Genre: Drama
Description: You’re just a simple girl but… In one moment everything changed. Do you have what It takes to find out who you REALLY are? FIND YOUR LOVE AND SOLVE THE MISTERY!
Cus. Characters

I would love a review please of 3 chapters! Thank you in advance for taking the time out to complete it x

Title : The Royal Princess
Author : Mollie.stories
Genre : Fantasy
Episodes : 7 (Ongoing)
Description : Secrets, scandals, lies and romance. Olivia’s ordinary life is suddenly changed when it unravels that she’s Royalty. Can she rule and find her King? YOU decide! CC

Thank you so much x

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