I had a similar topic to this, however I stopped that as I got so busy with my current story, so now I decided to review everyone’s story again. If you ever need constructive feedback I am here for you, I’ll help list everything both positive and negative There are a few basic rules…

  • Name of your story:
  • The username of your episode profile/Author’s Name:
  • Genre of your story:
  • How many published episodes:
  • Completed or not:

It will take me 1-3 working days to review your story, you can always ask me to review it again or ask for me to review another story, please don’t be rude, as I have a life to and can’t be tapping all day long. I’ll for sure read the first episode, sometimes I may read the first three for more feedback to give to you


By the way if I take any longer than 3 days, I’ll automatically read the first 3 chapters of your story.

Hey, it’s Winter. Please review @Episode-Royalty’s newly published story - it was published a couple hours ago.

Title: Surviving Love
Author: Episode Royalty
Description: Does distance really make the heart grow fonder? Or does it destroy everything you worked hard to keep? Distance may be a killer. Will you survive?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 3 (ongoing)

Please PM me the review! :wink:

Winter xx

Can’t wait to read this, I love reviewing new stories, this will be done soon as it can :slight_smile:

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Thank you so much! :blush:

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Oh yes, I was supposed to review this on my old topic but never got to it, I’ll review it this time and I’ll review two episodes for you :slight_smile:

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Title: Royal or Hunter
Author: Eden
Genre: Action
3 published episodes (they’re rly short)
Not completed but I’m not sure if I’m going to continue it

Link: 1

Could you review my story please? Thank you. :grinning:

Title: Addison
Author: Gabbie C.
Episode Style: Limelight
Summary: Addison moves to Los Angeles to become a singer. But when she forsakes herself for a record deal, and mixes business with pleasure, will she be able to prevail over evil?
Genre: Drama
Number of Episodes: 6 (not completed)
Status: More episodes coming soon…

Hi! I would appreciate an honest review :slight_smile:

Story Title: From Girly to Manly
Author’s Name: Lara
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
Published episodes: 10
Completed or not: Not yet


Would be happy if you can give me a review :slight_smile:

Name of my story: Wherever I go
The username of my episode profile/Author’s Name: Alisha Sophie
Genre of your story: Drama/Romance
How many published episodes: 5
Completed or not: Not yet

Thank you very much :slight_smile:

Review my story “I am Dating a Liar” I am new to this.

Name - I am Dating a Liar
Author - Amiara
Genre - Drama
Episode - 5 out (ongoing)
Description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.
Link -

Thank you.

Hey! Thankyou for doing this!!

Name of the story: Falling for a Superstar
Episode username: Nishee | Read my story
Genre: Romance
Description: Nicole unknowingly kisses a Superstar. Revelation,Differences, Acceptance! In the world of fame, can true love win?
No. of published episodes: 8
Completed or not: Not yet


Moved to Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live! :v:t2:

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The Fallen
4 published episodes
Not completed
Any feedback good or bad, big or small would be greatly appreciated. You said that you had a story also, if you ever want feedback on that I would be happy to help.

Hi, and thanks for doing this!

Name of your story: H & V: Twisted Truth
The username of your episode profile/Author’s Name: Otosaka Flowers / Charlotte G. & Ramona K.
Genre of your story: Mystery
How many published episodes: 3
Completed or not: Not complete, but the next episode (or possibly two) should be the last

Here’s the story link:

Hello! It’s really kind of you to start this thread! Here’s my story.

Author: E.Z.
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Ink
Chapters: 8 (on going)
Instagram: @e.z.episode
Description: He starved himself for three hundred years in order to abide by a woman’s promise. Everyone in Devildom is waiting for him to die.

Yes, please. Here’s my story.

Title:Her secrets, his sins
Username: Kls
Genre: Drama
3 episodes published
Not complete.
And here’s the link

Description : It’s about a sick twisted , psychotic man who falls dangerously in love with this girl, and is capable of doing anything to try and get her to be his.


Title: H&V:Cursed
Author/Username: C_D Erugo
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)

Description: You are Zara. A vampire princess cursed at birth. You thirst for vampire blood. You have enemies who want you dead. You are the hero of your country. Will you be able to save it?

Hi, @Shani_Theo!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story:

Hey i’m Tasha, please review my story here are the details

Title- Twin Drama

Author Name- TashaLeanneRose

Genre- Drama

Story Description- Two teenage girls, who happen to be twins are in for a whole lot of drama…
The question is why?

Instagram - tasha_leanne_rose31299

Chapters- 10 (ongoing)

Style - Classic