Description: You pretend to be pregnant to avoid getting fired from your dream job. But when and old crush, crazy ex, and hot co-worker come into the mix, things get a little bit messy…
Hey! I’d love a review please, it’s my first story and I published it 3 weeks ago
Author name : Marion
Instagram : @a_safe_danger
Style: LimeLight
Genre : Romance
Title:: A Safe Danger
CC: MC and LI
Story description:
“Still dealing with past traumas, I was forced to move to a new city and start a new life. Little did I know, I would meet someone who would forever change my life…”
Plot - The plot was overall amazing and I love the pace of it. I have to say that your narration is really good and it brings a lot of depth into what the MC is saying. It is also very unique as I’ve never read a story like this before, which makes it stand out more.
MC - The MC is hilarious LOL and so is Chase by the way. I can see her developing a lot more as a character in the future episodes. Her personality is a bit too bold but I like it!
SC (side characters) - As I mentioned before, Chase is hilarious. I love how supportive Drew is of the MC and her choices when it comes to personal matters. I love Seth! He seems like a genuine guy and has pure intentions with the MC.
Overall - Honestly, this is one of the stories that have genuinely made me laugh. This story has a lot of potential and I can see it making it big in the future! Your writing style is also really good and I love the little messages you inserted on the top discouraging drinking and driving. I’d also like to see more flashbacks of Seth and the MC to build some foundation between them for the readers! Keep on doing what you’re doing!
This story is a 5/5 !
I wish you the best on your writing journey on episode ! <3
Title:MANIC Author: MK Genre: Mystery/Drama Chapters: 4 and more to come soon Description: Watching someone you love in pain with nothing you can do is enough to make anyone go mad. But what happens when the madness takes over and leaves you a cold blooded killer? CC: ooooh yes IG:@mk_words_unwritten Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5905256216199168
Story : Captivating Reactions Author : Giuliannna (Insta Handle: @giulianna_creates) Genre : Romance Style : Limelight Description :Easton Rivers: The hottest and sexiest play-boy billionaire to ever to exist. But will being thrown into the mafia change his ways when he’s forced to marry a captive in disguise?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5324061978984448
Plot - The overall plot was different as we faced the traumas of the MC right off the bat. Meeting Tommy was really fast but that created the tension between Tommy and the MC. I definitely think this story is unique as it deals with matters of the heart. I would’ve preferred for the pace of the story to be a bit slower but its just a preference!
MC - The MC has a very bold personality and I would love to see as the story progresses some character development as she becomes closer to Tommy.
SC (side characters) - Charlie was really kind to the MC and Cece’s personality is very likable. Tommy is so cute towards the MC !! LMAO Fiona kills me every-time she calls out for Tommy.
Overall - The move to boarding school was very abrupt and I would have preferred for the MC to find out a bit differently. I love the mentioning of Tommy’s past! Makes him more alluring although I would have preferred for the rest to be a bit of a mystery and then to be uncovered as the story progresses. The narration is very different and I am living for it! The way the MC dealt with her trauma resurfacing is an accurate description of what someone that has PTSD deals with and I like how you described it. I kinda wish that Tommy and the MC could have been introduced slowly to build the tension between them, but nonetheless the MC’s reaction to him is building the tension. Your story has a lot of potential and I’m excited to see what happens next!
This story is a 4.5/5 !
I wish you the best on your writing journey on episode ! <3
Plot - The plot itself was really really intriguing! There was a lot of mystery and the pace of the story is perfect! This story is also unique and I have never read something like this!
MC - The MC was really gullible and I am afraid he might pay for it later! Kael is insanely awesome and I really love his character!
SC (side characters) - Aiden does really live up to his name of being the “mom” to Elli. Aiden and Elli’s relationship is really cute even though Aiden did flirt with him in the first episode! Vivi has a bold personality but it really does suit her as she is a detective!
Overall - The intro was very sudden and the flashbacks caught me off guard. I didn’t really know what was going on. Kael’s personality is very… intriguing! He gives me an alluring creepy vibe. That little interrogation moment between Kael and Elliott was amazing! Holy crap! Kael is a seriously interesting character! I love the way you wrote him out to be. The case is very well explained and the details are amazing! I love this story and I will definitely continue reading it!
This story is a 5/5 !
I wish you the best on your writing journey on episode ! <3
Thanks for this thread! Title: 1 Million Dares Author: CassieC Insta: Ceanah_cp Style: Limelight Description: Welcome to the World’s Most Eligible Daredevil Reality Show, where contestants must compete to win 1 Million dollars doing dangerous dares and challenges. Will you come out on top? Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6531616613793792
Genre - Mystery
Description - 4 teens find themselves being forced to solve a mystery together. Will they uncover the secrets of Rochdale or will they discover it’s best to let sleeping dogs lie?
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5960964081123328
Author IG - @epybruh
Story: Squad: Never Too Late. Author: Reginald Genre: Drama Description: A bunch of unhappy high-schoolers reach out to one another before adulthood. Their life problems don’t disappear, but boy, do they regret not having sought such friendships before. Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4725621289844736
Heyo . I would truly appreciate it if you can review my story. Story Title: Squad: The Gavinville Paranormal Team Synopsis: Episode App Synopsis: In Gavinville, monsters attempt to plague the city with its enhanced evil, and it is up to four squad heroes Karen, Sharon, Regina, and Max and Kyle to stop them. But will they? Full Synopsis:
In a town called Gavinville, monsters are known to plague the city with its evil and are up to no good, so it’s up to a squad team of heroes, Karen, Sharon, Regina, and Max and Kyle to stop the monsters from wrecking havoc in the city. But will they stop it in time? CC, Customize your squad, CC Name customization for two squad members, Genre: Action, Horror, a bit of suspense, Comedy, etc. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5755059564773376
Most choices do matter
Point System
Love Interests for Every Squad Member including Morgana
Mini games and tappable mini-games, etc.
There are some LGBTQ+ characters in this story, including my character Morgana the witch, a character who is a former bisexual, and more. I will be also adding some more as the story progresses
A Photoshoot at the end of chapter 3 for all of your squad members
Greetings! Thanks for this thread. I’m always on the lookout for means to get different opinions about my writing and I would love to hear your thoughts on my story Eternal Oblivion.
Title: Eternal Oblivion Author: Silver Lady IG:@silverlady.epi Genre: Fantasy primarily with some mystery, action, drama, romance, and just a hint of historical fiction thrown in from time to time (more so in later chapters). Style: Limelight Number of Episodes: Seventeen currently, more on the way. CC: Kinda. You can’t customize the main three characters (for story reasons), but there is a character for you to customize starting with chapter five. You won’t see much of her to start, but she becomes more important later in the plot. Description: Something ancient plots unseen in the darkness, and Amara must quickly uncover the mystery surrounding it. Otherwise, all will be lost. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6355100663873536 Cover:
(New) Description: Mending Love.Sincere Trust.Reopen wounds & Legal businesses equal a ticket out for the Morenos & the Del Ciellos, but who’s ever escaped the Mafia…without a price to pay?
Plot - The plot is somewhat unique, it does stand apart from others as the beginning scene shows something dark that was in the past.
MC - Hope seems to be very defensive towards Dan at this point. I hope to see some character development in future episodes where she becomes more open. A few flashbacks can help show why she is the way she is.
SC (side characters) - Ray seems very nice and supportive towards Hope. I have a feeling that Elizabeth and Hope are going to be enemies! This is very interesting. Rose seems very suspicious with Chase missing. This built in some suspense!
Overall - It’s a little too fast paced in the sense that I would like to get to know the characters and their relationships with one another throughout the story. The narration can be improved but its good as this is your first story! I wish the departure between Ray and Hope wasn’t so abrupt. I didn’t even realize that Hope was in love with Ray! This could have been introduced a lot better through flashbacks of their friendship and the build up towards her love for him. The relationship between Dan and Hope is very rocky due to Hope being defensive. This is good but I feel that it can be improved by including why Hope doesn’t seem to really trust men. If you ever need help with coding I can also help and give tips! Send me a DM if you’d like further assistance/advice.
This story is a 4/5 !
I wish you the best on your writing journey on episode ! <3
It seems I have come across a glitch in your story! In trying to pass the first mini game in where I have to collect the snowflakes, it appears there must be an error in the code.
It tells me that I didn’t collect all the snowflakes after I have tapped them all. The last snowflake that I can’t tap is the one in the center of Rosalie.
I will be happy to finish reviewing your story if you can fix this glitch! Please inform me after so that I can continue your full review.
