A Summer to die for
Plot - The plot was a bit rushed as the MC barely knew Benji, yet she decided to go with him to get food. This could have been done a bit differently and it wouldn’t be that awkward. Overall, this story is intriguing and it makes me interested in knowing what happened.
MC - I’d like to see the MC have some character development in future episodes but she was well introduced and she is somewhat relatable.
Sc (side characters) - I love the SC’s and their introductions. I do see them being a friend-group in future episodes. They were all well introduced.
Overall - This story is unique and the cliffhangers are spot on! It makes me interested in knowing what happened with the murder and who the culprit is. The pace is also done very well as nothing is rushed. However, I’d like to see why the MC and everyone else is interested in solving the murder. How and why are they deciding to try and figure out details? This would help the plot develop a bit better.
This story is a 4.5/5 !
I wish you the best on your writing journey on episode ! <3