Reviewing Stories: Grammar, Style, Plot Help!

Hello! I was hoping you could do a review of my story! I’m kind of stuck on where to go right now, so seeing what I’m missing now plot wise would really help. I know I have plans for exciting points further into the story but it’s the weird in-between of how to make an interesting story until I get there. I definiely wouldn’t mind reading or reviewing your story in exchange, even though I’m not really armed with an kind of credentials. I’m fairly new to Episode, writing, and coding. Unnecessarily long story short, would you mind reading and reviewing my story?

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