Reviewing Stories: Grammar, Style, Plot Help!

@chy.writes Hello, I’ve finished your review. I will provide some highlights of my review here and pm you the in-depth review. I’ve just decided I’ll do it in third person so it feels like a newspaper review lol and so if anyone stops by, they can learn about your story:)

So, Knights and Mages: The Revolution is a phenomenal story so far and I would highly recommend it.

The author Chy.writes has an exceptional command of language and spins an engaging fantasy/action story worth reading!

Characters are multilayered, complex, and simply interesting. The author combines themes of friendship, royal and political intrigue, and the struggles of class distinctions in a way that blend seamlessly for a great experience. Furthermore, the dialogue is well-crafted and often laced with a creative sense of humor.

Easily one of the best written, intriguing, and promising stories I’ve ever read on Episode!

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