Reviewing Stories!

I’d love to help y’all with your stories! I offer kind words and helpful tips! Drop your story name below if you’d like me to take a look!

Thanks for taking the time to look at stories! Here’s mine.
Title: Illegal Alien
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Stella befriends a stranger who stops her from committing suicide. Follow her life as she uncovers secrets of the mystery man and her own mortality.
Style: Limelight

Thank you for taking the time to read our stories. :smiley:

Title: Mei
Author: Manna
Genre: Action, Mystery, Drama
Description: It was almost as if he was waiting for me to come to his rescue, a trap set for me. Instead he fell into mine…
Instagram: @manna.episode


Hi! I’d love to hear your thoughts on my story!

Title: Hearts Reunited
Author: Akasha Seavue
Genre: Drama
Description: When a shadow from the past comes back into her life, will two hearts reunite or will his secrets destroy her life?


Thank you!

I’d love a review!
Title: A Twist Of Faith
Author: Lexi Lu
if you need more lmk I’m a lil lazy atm

Thanks for offering reviews! :joy:
Title: Just My Luck
Author: Mikaylah
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Rich girl meets rich boy… then they found out their fathers are rivals, just as they start to fall for each other. How can they keep this a secret? Will it all work out?

Please review mine! Thank uuuu :sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart:
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he isn’t…He hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 5 (ongoing)
Instagram: oo_anjj

Thank you for this opportunity xx
My details are below.

Title: Filling A Void
Author: Amber Thompson
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 3 and on going
Instagram: amber__episode

Title of Story: Zartrensa: Hearts of War
Author: Clarkie
Genre: Drama
Description: You’re forced to marry the prince of an enemy country. Only to learn some troubling secrets along the way.
CC/Choices Matter/LGBT
also check out my insta

Hello, this is my first story, all feedback is welcome. This is a short story about Megan Sinclair and her group of friends having a night out on the town. What could possible go wrong?
1.” To the Night”
2. Megan Beard
3. 5 episodes
4. Comedy
5. Ink
Thanks :blush:


I hope you could notice mine hehehe.

I have published my story. the first episode is quite common but i assure you that it is not a common girl drama wolf vampire drama. i hope you will find time to read my story. :slight_smile: thanks! I assure you the story gets better 1-3 are pilot so bear with me if they are short. 6 episodes uploaded already
P.S. it is not really all wolves and vampires there’s more to it so stay tuned
Story: Unexpected You
Genre: Romance/Action/Fantasy
Author: Haneen
Teaser: A girl who thought her junior year would be normal as she expected to be. It turns out there are a lot of unexpected events happening in her life. Will she survive? Who is her man?


Wow really? Finding time to read my story would be great! Please leave your thoughts! :smiley:
Title: Sing with me
Description:Tragedy . Can a wounded lover be able to move on and find peace or will everything fade away like the foam of the salted sea?

Title of Story: Family Values by: Danny

Genre: Drama
Description: “Secrets. Betrayal. Tragedy. The Baldwin family was tight knit- but all it takes is one stray thread to unravel it all.” A family as close as ever- with secrets no one could imagine. When things begin to slowly unravel before them, will your bond with them still be as strong? Or will you break under all the pressure?


Title: filling a void
Author: Amber Thompson
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight

Thank you xx

Hey there! This is my first story.

Story Name: The College Diaries
Author: A. V.
Genre: Drama (-Romance)
Style: INK
Description: Love, friends, drama- everything finally seems better. Will you let your haunting past take control of your life? [CC] - 4 Love Interests! (choices matter)

I’d love to see what you think about my story! :slight_smile:

I only have one episode complete and part of my second I was wandering if you could let me know how I am doing and any advice you could give me.

This is my first story I published and these are the details for it, I hope you guys could read it.
Author: feck.b
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?
Instagram: feck.b (sneak peeks and edits will be posted once my followers are up).

This story also uses East London slang.

Thank you so much for doing this!

Title: H & V: In Too Deep
Style: Limelight (CC)
Author: Sweet Stories
Genre: Fantasy/Romance

Hey, can you please review my story??

Title: Romantic Cruise
Author: Lawful Evil
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance, Drama
Episodes: 4 [Completed] 2 endings
Description: You break up with your cheating boyfriend and go on a cruise. What will happen if you meet a mysterious dangerous man? Customize Characters

Hey there, I would love to get some feedback on my new story!

Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past
Author: Zayen Ng
Genre: Action
Style: Ink
Story Description: Running from a secret organization that raised you as an assassin, how long could you hide before your past catches up to you? How far will things have to go before you kill again?
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