Reviewing Your Stories! - [OFFLINE]


Hey guys!
I know writing a story is difficult, especially when it’s your first one. So I thought I would help some of you by reviewing your stories. I really like helping others and giving them feedback so that they can improve and be at their best. I can be very picky (as my preferences are towards ink stories) and I will be very honest. So if you don’t like to have an honest review, you should think twice about replying.
Okay, so for me to read your story, you have to do a couple of things:

  • Name of the story
  • Style: Ink or Limelight or Classic
  • Genre
  • Small description
  • The link of the story

I will be giving the feedback in private messages.

EDIT: Reading the first 2-3 episode of your story
ANOTHER EDIT: Excuse me in advance! I’m a bit slow, BUT I WILL REVIEW YOUR STORY :sweat_smile:


Hi @cavanna! I would love it if you read and gave some feedback on my story with @/Loversdelight! :hugs:

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link:


Feel free to leave me fanmail! I hope you enjoy it!

~ Winter :snowflake:


Of course, I will start to read it now. I will give you the feedback when I have read the first 2 episodes.


Okay, awesome, thank you! :blush:


You have a story :scream:


Yeah. You didn’t know?! :joy:


I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of refugees who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.

Please tell me everything I need to work on. I hope you enjoy it!




Thank you for doing this!
My story:
Name: Alternate Universe
Type: Limelight
Genre: fantasy
Small description: Guy enters a parallel universe by accident and discovers hidden secrets within it.

As of right now I don’t have a cover but it’s on the way lol


You way overuse that GIF. :expressionless:




TITLE : Thriller: Murder in a small town

Description: A female lawyer goes back to the small town she left to help save an innocent man from death row. Diversity in characters. Character customization of the main character. LGBTQ+ side characters. Choice between straight or lesbian. Will also have two different possible love interests. Also choices will matter.
Chapters: 4 with at least 10 planned.

Genre: Thriller/Romance

Style: Limelight


It would be great to get input thanks.


Thank you, I will start to read right now.

  • Name of the story -
    Betting on a double
  • Type: Ink or Limelight or Classic -
  • Genre
  • Small description
    Jordan is a normal kid living a normal life until a case of mistaken identity turns his whole world upside down
  • The link of the story


I would love to get an honest review :slight_smile:

Name of the story: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Type: Limelight
Genre: drama
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose?

Thank you so much :blush:


Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 8 (more coming soon, I’m trying to update once a week)
Updates to this story: Dreams and Nightmares - my first story


Hi I’d appreciate if you’d take a look at my story?

Title: Finding You
Genre: Romance
Type: INK
Episodes: 6
Description: When love seems so distant, what happens when two strangers find themselves running into each other everywhere they go? Will there be love at first sight? Or drown in sorrows?



I searched for it in the app, but I couldn’t find it. Could you give me the link of your story, because you gavce me the link of the Episode app.


Hey Laura, I am making a start to read your story right now. I will give the feedback as soon as possible.


Hi there!
Thank you for creating this thread! If you are still accepting requests, I’d love to get some feedback on my story. Here are the details:
Title: Lie to Me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Style: Ink
Genre: Drama
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.