Hi guys,
To get straight to the point, I’m kind of bored. Since I have some time this week, I’d like to read your Episode stories, published or unpublished. (If you have an unpublished story and don’t want to share it with everyone, you can always privately message me the link.)
Here are a few things you should know. Please do read the following:
I’ll only be reading 1 to 3 episodes. It really depends on how much I enjoy the story and how long each episode is, so please don’t take it personally if I only review 1 or 2.
I’m just doing this for fun. I may not get to everyone. IMPORTANT:If you’re looking for a serious reviewer who will rate all the different aspects of your story or whatnot, then I highly recommend finding another thread.
I’ll be giving my honest thoughts. Everyone has a bias, and I am no exception. Just because I didn’t enjoy your story or certain parts of it, doesn’t mean it’s “bad” or that no one will enjoy it. I don’t want my opinions to discourage you.
If you do not ask for your review to be private (as in I will message you), then I will simply reply on this thread.
With all that I’ve mentioned above in mind, please write the words “I read it” in your request.
Story: Captivating Reactions
Author: Giuliannna (Insta Handle: @giulianna_creates)
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Easton Rivers: The hottest and sexiest playboy to ever exist. But will being thrown into his father’s dark world change his ways when he’s forced to marry a captive in disguise? LL
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5324061978984448
I think I’ll bookmark this in case I decide to have a review done. I don’t like my story at all right now, so it might be nice to get a little feedback on it.
Title: I married my troublemaker (limelight) Author name: Miss Deepika Style: Limelight Episode: 23 so far Description: Fixed marriage with a person who brings trouble in your life, will this marriage turned out to be a success or big misery in your life.
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Genre: comedy Ig:@orangeweedie.episode
English is not my first language so kindly bear my small mistakes
I like the character card and the story description. It’s very mysterious, hooking, and interesting.
I love that the choices matters, and that there’s a make MC. I was definitely excited to start the story.
Overall, the spot directing told the story well. It was very smooth. Nice overlays, too.
As for grammar, I’m pretty picky. There were only a few errors (mostly regarding comma placement). Overall, good job.
In episode 1, there was a lot of info dumping at the beginning. I like how there was at least some story being told in the background. I wish I could have learned more from actual conversations or other sorts of character interaction, though. It’s more fun that way, and readers usually retain more information. Even though what you were saying was interesting, it would be better to SHOW more instead of narrate everything in my opinion. But overall, the opening was a good introduction for what was to come.
I wish you had added more emotion to the scene where Mother Dawn dies. It seems to be very important, but it seems to have been brushed off a little in that moment.
The choices were a lot of fun.
On a scale from 1 through 10, 5 being average (which is not at all bad), I’d give the first episode a 6.5/10. This kind of fantasy just isn’t my thing, so I’m not really against the way you wrote it.
Here’s my story:
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