Let’s help each other out with some honest reviews and feedback, We can do read 4 reads or Reviews for reviews, Just share your story’s info below and I will post the proof I’ve read it and give you my feedback
Here’s one of my links : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6124591068872704
I’m using a computer too, (Its a lame cover)
But anyways: The MC broke up with her boyfriend because of her dad, who wanted her to get married to another guy, she eventually will meet her ex again , and who knows , maybe the old flame will re-ignite
My small cover is not approved yet so it will show no cover tell you click on it then my second one will show up!
It’s called Alone Tell There Was You
It is about Summer a single mother of two twins Tayler and Tyler and how she had a hard life tell she meet’s Spencer Cole who change’s her like for the better! But what happens when she finds out who his?? (He’s not you’re normal gang leader!)
I’m telling you I love stories with bad guys , I’ll read yours and I’ll post a screenshot to show you that I have read it, since I’m new on the forums I have limited replies so I might not reply , I would like a new cover, but what do you use to make your covers ??
I’ll message you on the cover and let you know everything I need! I made the top one someone else made the bottom one for me! The first 4 Chapter’s don’t really go into Spencer’s like a lot and but it will start to as the story goes.
Dan and Lauren form a deal to help each other find what they’re looking for.
My story: Class Crush : Find your Love Author: Dina Carmen Genre: Drama Story style: Limelight Description: Lauren is a relationship expert who has never been in one. Lauren agrees to help Dan get his crush’s attention, while he agrees to help her find her estranged mother. Episodes: 5 (more coming soon) Instagram:@dcmep
Lauren - Put together girl who is known as the relationship expert. She has never been in a relationship. She also has an estranged mother.
Dan - Lovable guy, who needs a little help in the relationship department.
Brad - The childhood friend who wants to go back to the way it was before
@dramaqueen.episode in your fist scene were she runs away move her to layer 2 so she is not behind him when she runs away.
When Sebastian is in his room when it’s still in black and white use spot help to move him down on the floor.
At the end of the first Episode you forgot to rest your zoom so you can’t see what ever is at the end!
Make sure you do fade out before the next background then fad in after you set the new background that way it don’t fade in and out on one scene the jump the next when you are wanting it to fade
Mostly just spotting and layer placement is it a little work on that is all it needs. I really like the story line a lot, I really want to see what happens next!
Thanks for the feedback or review whatever it is , I’ll fix those errors and I guess I’ll start working on chapter 4, I also tried to fix the Who’s there, positions and the zoom so you didn’t know who it was ,I mean it could have been Rick, or a friend, Or RICK
Just feedback. I really liked it though and will be watching for Chapter 4 so I can read more! I want to know why she had to leave him and what he is going to do to her! It was really good. Just a few error’s I have fixed mine 3 times before you read mine so it’s okay we all learn and I just wanted to help out if I can!
I’ll do a r4r. I will add it to my favorites and message you with SS and feedback once I’m finished.
Here’s my story info:
Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Number of episodes: 11 (ongoing)
Description: When a powerful young couple steals the Kings most prized possession, it starts a chain reaction that will either destroy their world or return it to its former glory. (two possible endings)