Reviews and feedbacks

@gisellec and @TLdax913 I’ll be sure to check them out, at the moment my phone is charging so by tomarrow I’ll have read them

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I’m happy you like it! :slight_smile: I’ll make sure to upload updates every week! I’m going to write my reviews right now!

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 6 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment.

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5221523745800192

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Hey, I would live to do a read for read with you or a review for review, whatever you prefer, just let me know so I can start on your story and when I’m done I’ll send you the screen shots.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.

Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384

I’ve just published my new story!
Purple Eyes by Ava Rose
I’d love if you could read and possibly some feedback!


Hi!
I enjoyed your story, the plot is very intriguing. It had me wondering why she left Sebastian (Javy) and want was going to happen next.

My only suggestion is to fix some of the spot placement and layering.
For example: When they are at the club, the creepy guy is standing on Lany and then when Sebastian saves her is standing on her as well. Also when Sebastian is in his room after Lany breaks up with him, he looks like he is floating.
Overall the storyline is good and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next! :blush:

Story Title: Centripetal Force - The Laws Of Attraction
Author Name: TCL
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 4 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: Going in circles and getting nowhere? Sometimes all it takes is a little bit of science and a couple of supermodel roommates to set love on its proper course. (customization)
Twitter Name: @TCL38176782
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6129843251838976
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