Reviews and Help with coding


#1

Anybody want a story review?
And if you need help with coding or ideas I can help too.
Just DM me on Instagram kayla.b10 or send me a message here


#2

Could you review my story? All three episodes of possible


#3

What’s the name?


#4

Let me get the info real quick…


#5

Okay


#6

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.
Cover:

HERE’S THE LINK!
I’m a little nervous! I hope you like it! Please be honest!


#7

I will read it and let you know what I think as soon as possible


#8

No rush!


#9

I would like a review too! You can read as many episodes as possible :slight_smile:

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being the Hybrid Queen is not easy. War, love, and betrayal awaits.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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#10

Can you review my story?


#11

Would love a review also,

My story is called Crossed Paths by Dreamer


#13
  • Amazing coding skills
  • Maybe do less fades
  • Instead of having the MC say her thoughts out loud make her think it with a thought bubble
  • I really enjoyed our story it’s honestly amazing and can’t wait for the next episodes
  • I love the characters the way you made their personalities, can’t wait to learn more about Jax

#14

of course what’s the title
I’ll get back to you as soon as possible


#15

I’ll get back to you as soon as possible


#16

Thank you Kayla


#17

I’ll get back to you as soon as possible.


#18

Omg, thanks so much!!!


#19

No problem, your doing an amazing job keep writing that story because I love it and really want to get to know more about it


#20

Aww! I’m actually writing episode 4. I’m on about the 1000s line, so hopefully it won’t be to long!


#21

I would love some feedback on my story.
I’m finding it difficult to have the motivation to post frequently and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism!

Genre: Thriller, romance, mystery
Title: Oh, Devil
Author: Zepheríne
Plot/Summary: Mephistopheles has a plan for you. Will you end up making a deal with a Daemon? Or are there forces even darker than him waiting to claim you.
Style: Ink
Cover:

Link to my story is here

I’m working my way through episode 4 very slowly as this story has an unreal amount of branching due to choices affecting the survival of the MC, but I’m hoping all the complexity will make it worth it.
If you decide to read it, I hope you enjoy :blush: