Reviews, and reads to cheer new authors up

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 3:50pm

I’ll give you reads and reviews to help you

24aya · June 17, 2018, 3:56pm

Thanks but how are you going to do that?

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 3:58pm

just give me your story name and a little description, and I will read it and give you feedback as quick as I can

24aya · June 17, 2018, 4:00pm

Title–> Choose!!!
Author —>@ya
Description—>
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Link—>

Thanks for help

Hope you enjoy

feel free to leave fanmail if you like , and any suggestions you have:slight_smile:

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 4:07pm

Sounds interesting, I will read it right now and while waiting for replies feel free to check my new story Last Dance I’m a new author and I would as well appreciate some feedback and opinions.

24aya · June 17, 2018, 4:08pm

Last dance? Sounds amazing ,will do (in 2/3days)

WinterMoon05 · June 17, 2018, 4:15pm

Hi. I’d love if you’d read my two stories!

Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future - Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Quiet Confidence - Winter05 with S.Dsana

I hope you enjoy them! Feel free to leave fanmail and PM me feedback!!

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 4:17pm

Sure, but just be a little bit patient thx for your trust

WinterMoon05 · June 17, 2018, 4:18pm

Of course, no problem.

Alex_Af · June 17, 2018, 4:51pm

Hi, @Mia13La!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. It has 4 different endings and it is really animated! All the backgrounds are custom and there is a special art scene as well. I promise, the plot will also keep you hooked

Here is the video trailer I made so that you can get a better idea what the story is about:

My story details:

Name of story: Fantastical: Black Shadow
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3
Summary of story: Having women on board is considered bad luck? Well, as the most wanted pirate captain, you’ll certainly bring the worst luck to anyone who dares cross your path. CC, choices matter
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6081182347689984
Instagram: @episode.alex.af

maria.y · June 17, 2018, 4:53pm

Hey! Thanks for creating this thread. I’m hoping you could review my story:

Story Title: Obsessed
Author: Maria Y.
Description: You’re obsessed with this one guy. The problem is, you’re not sure if he likes you or not. Are you able to navigate through all the drama and still get what you want?
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 6(Ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5517774061699072

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 4:55pm

Your story sounds so exciting I can’t wait to read it!

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 4:56pm

Of course, I will

Alex_Af · June 17, 2018, 5:01pm

Thank you so much, I hope you will like it!

kahotshot · June 17, 2018, 5:08pm

I have 3 stories. Here are my stories:

Title: Projection!
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Description: Harry Stevens is looking for his big break in the world of musical theatre. But what will it take to get there?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6046875219918848

Title: Publicity Problems
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Samantha Xanders struggles with her fame after receiving unwanted publicity. Can she overcome the challenges of stardom?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4689222272417792

Title: Video Game Champion
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Action
Description: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5634634595172352

aprilish · June 17, 2018, 5:23pm

Hey, @Mia13La! Thank you for creating this thread. I’d love if you’d read my story. Here are the details:

Title: Fantastical: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much! Have a great day!

gisellec · June 17, 2018, 5:55pm

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode

ab.creates · June 17, 2018, 8:14pm

Thank you so much for doing this! I’ve just made a new story. I hope you like it

Nierido · June 17, 2018, 8:31pm

Hey! Thanks for creating this thread!
My story : Let the demon inside

Gender: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood because of your brother. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504

Mia13La · June 17, 2018, 10:21pm

Review of choose?!
I only read the 1st chapter bc I don’t have much passes and I have quite a lot of stories to read and review.
1 The first thing that I thought about while reading was wow the spot directing is amazing and it made the experience a lot better.
2 I think you should write better I mean you should capitalize the i, and put dots at the end of sentences, it might seem useless but it makes the writing seem well done.
3 I recommend you create your own characters instead of using the ones that Episode gives bc it make the story more unique.
4 Overall the idea is pretty nice but you should work on the directing and details to make it better
Keep up the good work I enjoyed reading very much❤