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Hello! I’d be happy to review your story
The only condition is that you’ll review mine :slight_smile:
You can send me your review to my instagram name:mcmplepisode
And I’ll leave a review for you wherever you want me to just tell me.
Thanks for all the helpers.
Name of the story :Upside Down by MCMPLL
You can review however you want.

itle: The Man inside the Gang Leader
Author: tammyire
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Romance and Action
Style: Limelight
Plot Summary: The gang life is the only life that Blaire penelope has ever known. No-one really ‘falls in love’ so when the gang leader falls for her,she doesn’t know what to do.
Link: 1

& it’s also lgbt+ friendly meaning that you can choose your sexual preference. I’ll do read for read and review for review just comment. Thank you. I’ll read yours soon.

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I read your story and my notes are:
1)Great plot but you move to quickly to the next scene. I think it the would be nice if you’ll make the scenes a bit longer.
2)I love how you gave the readers a choice with who they want to be.
3)You give style choices and customization which is great!
4)I like how you explain the situations.
I liked your story!

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thank you! I’ve fixed all that

:slight_smile: can you do a review on my story please?

Hey I just read your story and here is my feedback:

Some scenes are happening so fast that I have a bit of trouble to understand them, I mean, it looks like a great story, just try to use some transitions between each scene so the story can flow smoothly

I just published one a few days ago so I would really love if you could read it to!

Title: The Nation D
Author: P Marroquín
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
Style: Limelight
Number of episodes: 4 (ongoing)
Description: A dead girl is your only way out from the place where you’re trapped, what is your new destination? And what dark secrets does it hide? Will you finally find answers to your past?

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No problem thank you very much I’ll work on it :slight_smile:

Hiya! :blush:
I have Currently 11 episodes out. :smile:
Title- Hidden Behind Lies…
Author- Chy.dillon
Genre- Romance but will be abit of action
description- What happens when your dad has a past and it finally catches up to you? Nothing is what it seems…
story link_

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Hey there! I’m interested in reviewing your story! I will PM you with the review when I have read it if that’s ok with you?

Fantastical: Saving Hybrid

Author: Silkhydra

Description: Your life is changed forever on one fateful night when you are attacked by a ghoul. High school, sexy strangers, and jokester pixies? What could go wrong? (C.C & Multiple Romance!)

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Chapters published: 3 (ONGOING) :rofl:

Instagram: Silkhydra_episode

Thank you very much, I’ll start reading your story after thursday as soon as possible I have a big exam this thursday same goes for @shewrites.episode @paumarr


Thanks! Let me know when you can get around to it!

Title: Fantastical: A Fight for Love

Author: Ashsmashum
Style: Limelight
Description: Follow Raven and Tilian through the twists and turns of several magical worlds as they fight their way back home.

Would love it if you check out my story!
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re the Queen of the Supernaturals. What’ll happen when you find out that your mate is your pack’s enemy, and your kidnapper? CC ChoicesMatter
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy/romance
Style: Limelight
Instagram: emberpackepisode

I read your story great plot I don’t really like fantasy but this story got me to like this gener good job:)

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I read your first episode and it looks amazing!!! Directing is awesome dialog is awesome background, characters everything is great!!! I added your story ti my favorites

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
And I’m reading your story now :wink:

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OMG! Thank you so much! :two_hearts:

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miss avery’s little secret
style: ink
genre: mystery
current episode: 12
description : Avery has been avoiding on thing her whole life, her past. What happens when it all comes rushing back? Will her secret be told? Will the people she loves trust her?
ig is @episode.hina! I will read your story then dm you, ok? xx


I’m a new writer and would love some feed back on my first story too :two_hearts:

Title : Fantastical: Tale Of The Ocean :shell::hibiscus::palm_tree:
Author: Tiffany Lucero
Number of Episodes :3
Gene : Fantasy Style : Limelight
This is my first contest entry and my very first story ever!! Would love to make it better after the contest and would like to know how

Hi I’m Venus and here is my story I really hope you like it :blush:

Story title: REPUTATION
Author: Venus
Instagram: episode.venuss
Genre: Romance/Comedy
Style: INK
Episodes: 9 (ongoing)
Story description: Auora is a super famous and talented actress but her past is coming after her. Past that she manged to survive and build a whole new life out of it. Will it all break down or will she manged to survive again. Her love life and her friendships do you think it’ all about REPUTATION? Welcome to her adventure…