I have some days off, I did a review the other day and found I really liked doing it. So if anyone wants a review if your story, I’m your person.
How To Lay Your Request Out
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Please Note That I Only read Episode One
GamrrGuy
EDIT:
This thread is CLOSED while I read the following:
H & V: Fate
H & V: Twisted Truth
Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
I’m So Confused
Video Game Champion
Cupids Arrow: You Cannot Buy My Love
Love Has No Color
Sandy and her Quadruplets
The Undercover student
Fantastical: Falling From Grace
Hey, I’d love a review! Here are my story details:
NAME OF STORY: Reformed
AUTHOR OF STORY: Cordelia M
DESCRIPTION: Reformed bad girl falls for bad boy who reminds her of her past - cliché, right? But what if Violet isn’t truly reformed? What if she’s still badder than Carter ever was?
GENRE: Romance (but thinking of changing to mystery?)
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968
Grading
How I grade is based on three bases: Character Development, Plot and Directing. Bonus Points can ne awarded for things not listed above the max bonus ia 5
The most u can be awarded overall is 35.
I feel that I didnt know where the story was going and all I knew was that we might find out about her twisted life. But in some cases you may not want to reveal any thing. As its episode one.
bonus Character Customisation
I feel that a lot a readers like to customise (t his is a generic overview) and I think it makes the reader mire eager to read more knowing the mc looks like them tho I guess u had reason not to do so. I’M not trying to rood im any way.
I think that u didnt tell to much about the character but just enough to keep them interested. What I think you can work on is introduce the best friend more, but if she’s not a main charater then ignore this as I only read chapter one 7/10 for Character Development.
Directing
You dircting was clean because you didn’t take much risks and experimented if you took a few risk it could come out better.
Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked Episode advocates recommended! (which has made me insanely happy. Go check their account for awesome recommendations if you haven’t yet!)
My story details:
Name of story: H & V: Fate Author: Alex Af Genre: Thriller Episodes: 4 (completed) Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter. Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728 Instagram: @episode.alex.af
NAME OF STORY: H & V: Twisted Truth
AUTHOR OF STORY: Charlotte G. & Ramona K.
DESCRIPTION: A tragic incident caused you dissociative amnesia. Doctors advise you to take distance from what happened, but someone desperately wants you to remember. Can you handle the truth?
GENRE: Mystery
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4930114276163584
Hi. Thank you for this!! I hope you enjoy my story!
Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty Customization?: Limited Style: INK Genre: Drama Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE] Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same. Instagram Names:@winter05.episode with @penroyalty Story Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6395210318086144
Name of story: I’m So Confused Author: Savanna W. Description: She’s always been confused about boys, friends, drama and well…life. What happens when she loses her memory and is more confused than ever? This is getting changed slightly. Genre: Drama Share link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5520688912531456
Thanks for doing this! There’s things I already know I need to change about the first episode, like the opening scene. Warnings: There’s a lot of swearing, so if that offends you don’t read it and it may seem a lil’ cliche, but I promise it’s not (I’ll explain it later on). Also, can you (if you review it) send me the review by PM? Thanks again
NAME OF STORY: Video Game Champion
AUTHOR OF STORY: Karlon Artis
DESCRIPTION: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?
GENRE: Action
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5634634595172352
NAME OF STORY: Cupid’s Arrow: Love Gone Wrong
AUTHOR OF STORY: GirlLykAnn
DESCRIPTION: Your love life falls into the hands of Cupid, are you doomed?
GENRE: Romance | Drama | Fantasy
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5759154808684544
Hello @GamrrGuy !!! This is my first story on Episode! Hope you will like it
Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy
Style : Ink
Completed : No (I wrote 9 episodes)
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160
Name: The Undercover Student
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 3 ongoing
Description: Cop Lilly has never been girly girl, but what happens when she goes undercover at high school and has to become one of the popular kids?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6553317050548224
So, Episode Royalty has multiple stories we’d love reviews on but they’re all from the same author. Can we still submit all three stories? Does this make more sense? I’m kinda rubbish at explaining stuff lol.