Reviews Here If Wanted (CLOSED WHILE I READ 10 PENDING REVIEWS)

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#1

I have some days off, I did a review the other day and found I really liked doing it. So if anyone wants a review if your story, I’m your person.

How To Lay Your Request Out

NAME OF STORY:
AUTHOR OF STORY:
DESCRIPTION:
GENRE:
SHARE LINK:

Please Note That I Only read Episode One
GamrrGuy

EDIT:
This thread is CLOSED while I read the following:
H & V: Fate
H & V: Twisted Truth
Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
I’m So Confused
Video Game Champion
Cupids Arrow: You Cannot Buy My Love
Love Has No Color
Sandy and her Quadruplets
The Undercover student
Fantastical: Falling From Grace

I hope this causes no inconvience

TIA

GamrrGuy


#2

Hey, I’d love a review! Here are my story details:

NAME OF STORY: Reformed
AUTHOR OF STORY: Cordelia M
DESCRIPTION: Reformed bad girl falls for bad boy who reminds her of her past - cliché, right? But what if Violet isn’t truly reformed? What if she’s still badder than Carter ever was?
GENRE: Romance (but thinking of changing to mystery?)
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968

Thanks so much!
Xx


#3

Okay I’ll check it out!:grin:


#4

Review

Grading
How I grade is based on three bases: Character Development, Plot and Directing. Bonus Points can ne awarded for things not listed above the max bonus ia 5
The most u can be awarded overall is 35.

Plot


I feel that I didnt know where the story was going and all I knew was that we might find out about her twisted life. But in some cases you may not want to reveal any thing. As its episode one.

bonus Character Customisation
I feel that a lot a readers like to customise (t his is a generic overview) and I think it makes the reader mire eager to read more knowing the mc looks like them tho I guess u had reason not to do so. I’M not trying to rood im any way.

Character Development:

I think that u didnt tell to much about the character but just enough to keep them interested. What I think you can work on is introduce the best friend more, but if she’s not a main charater then ignore this as I only read chapter one
7/10 for Character Development.

Directing
You dircting was clean because you didn’t take much risks and experimented if you took a few risk it could come out better.


#5

That’s a good point actually! I realise the little intros of characters are a bit inconsistent so I should probably do it for all characters or none.

Thank you for the feedback!

Xx


#6

Hi, @GamrrGuy!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush: Episode advocates recommended! (which has made me insanely happy. Go check their account for awesome recommendations if you haven’t yet!)

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#7

Hey, thanks for doing this!

@ramones and I have made this story:

NAME OF STORY: H & V: Twisted Truth
AUTHOR OF STORY: Charlotte G. & Ramona K.
DESCRIPTION: A tragic incident caused you dissociative amnesia. Doctors advise you to take distance from what happened, but someone desperately wants you to remember. Can you handle the truth?
GENRE: Mystery
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4930114276163584

I hope you’ll enjoy reviewing this as well :smile:


#8

Hi. Thank you for this!! I hope you enjoy my story! :heart:

Story Title: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
Author Name: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
Customization?: Limited
Style: INK
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 6 [COMPLETE]
Story Description: All it takes is one shot to change your whole life. Win or lose, nothing will ever be the same.
Instagram Names: @winter05.episode with @penroyalty
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6395210318086144

~ Winter :snowflake:


#10

Name of story: I’m So Confused
Author: Savanna W.
Description: She’s always been confused about boys, friends, drama and well…life. What happens when she loses her memory and is more confused than ever? This is getting changed slightly.
Genre: Drama
Share link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5520688912531456

Thanks for doing this! There’s things I already know I need to change about the first episode, like the opening scene. Warnings: There’s a lot of swearing, so if that offends you don’t read it and it may seem a lil’ cliche, but I promise it’s not (I’ll explain it later on). Also, can you (if you review it) send me the review by PM? Thanks again :blush:


#11

NAME OF STORY: Video Game Champion
AUTHOR OF STORY: Karlon Artis
DESCRIPTION: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?
GENRE: Action
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5634634595172352


#12

NAME OF STORY: Cupid’s Arrow: Love Gone Wrong
AUTHOR OF STORY: GirlLykAnn
DESCRIPTION: Your love life falls into the hands of Cupid, are you doomed?
GENRE: Romance | Drama | Fantasy
SHARE LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5759154808684544


#13

Hey, thank you so much for creating this thread! I hope you enjoy my story.
Title: Love Has No Color
Author: Brenda Adams
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 4
Description: Naturelle is finally able to attend public school for her senior year. She ends up meeting a charming boy that has dark family secrets What happens when those secrets get revealed?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5700092797779968
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#14

Hello @GamrrGuy !!! This is my first story on Episode! Hope you will like it :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy
Style : Ink
Completed : No (I wrote 9 episodes) :slightly_smiling_face:
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160

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#15

Please review my story if you have time :slight_smile: x

Name: The Undercover Student
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 3 ongoing
Description: Cop Lilly has never been girly girl, but what happens when she goes undercover at high school and has to become one of the popular kids?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6553317050548224


#16

I’m gonna be really busy over the next couple days…


#17

So:
@random_life
@CordeliaM
@WinterMoon05
@brvnda
@GirlLykAnn
@kahotshot
@charlotteg and @ramones
@Alex_Af

All your request are accepted your review will come soon…:open_mouth:
Cannot wait too see the creatuvity this community has!


#18

Thank you. :blush:

  • Can we submit more than one review of a story from the same author(s) (same author, different stories)? :thinking:

#19

Thank you! :two_hearts:


#20

I don’t understand?


#21

U mean have differnt stories?

If thats it then it okay