Beta read my chapter 1?

Hello, I was wondering if anyone could read my first chapter and give feedback/revise it? I need someone to just point out mistakes I might have missed (grammar, spelling mistakes, overlay layers, character layers, ect.), and I would like to hear your opinions too! Be 100% honest and Thank you so so much!

You can request for proofreading here :point_down:

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