@medusa.jett your Request has been completed 
Creativity: 7 points
Grammar/Punctuation: 9 points
Music: 5 points
If I would read it in the future: 4 points
In total, you got 25/30 points
Now, to my opinion…
I think that the idea of this story was creative and that it was a really good idea for a story. I liked that it had good grammar and a pretty good flow when it came to everything.
Things that I didn’t like were… nothing! I thought that it was a really good story so far