|| River's Review Thread! ❤ ||


#1

|| RIVER’S REVIEW THREAD ||

:green_heart: SLOTS TAKEN: 1 / 4

Hey, guys! It’s EpisodeGirl AKA River :wink:
I’ve decided to open up a review thread, which I have wanted to do for a long time!
Since I am rather busy, I will only be doing 3 reviews at a time. If all the slots are full, wait to request! If one is open, you don’t have to ask to request a review, just fill out the form and await your review! These will be very thought out and detailed, so they can take awhile! Please don’t ask me when it will be done, I will get to it when I can.

|| HOW I REVIEW

I read the first two chapters, then review under the following statistics:

Statistics

| Title:
Is the title fitting and appealing?

| Description:
Is the description entrancing and interesting? Does it make me want to read?

| Cover:
Is the cover pretty and interesting? Does it fit the story?

| Opening:
Does the opening scene(s) “hook” me and make me want to read the rest? Is it interesting?

| Characters:
Are the characters diverse? Are they interesting looking/different from each other?

| Plot:
Is the overall plot interesting and fun to read? Is the pace good? Is it thought out and are choices well-placed?

| Art:
Are the splashes, art scenes, intros/outros, custom overlays/backgrounds, and other art (if any) well placed, visually attractive, and well made? Did you credit if they are not your own?

| Ending:
Does the ending leave me wanting more?

| Length:
Are your episodes good length and interesting / not too short.

| Overall:
How was your story overall?

I add up all your points and then grade you on that.

|| RULES FOR ENTRY

Make sure you read these before submitting your story for review or you will be denied.

Rules
  1. Fill out all the information required. Skip nothing! PM me if you are unsure about one of the questions.
  2. You may NOT enter if you have already requested a review from more than 2 other threads. I want to be fair and give everyone a shot at a review, and you already have one coming. I will be checking! :wink:
  3. Don’t ask me when it will be done. This is super annoying and I am rather busy so I will get to your when I can. If you pester me, I will most likely cancel your review.
  4. Keep the thread clean. Only post review requests and nothing else. PM me if you need anything or need to ask any questions. If it is off topic, I will most likely report it.
  5. I will be honest. I will share my opinion, even if it is a little harsh. Don’t get mad, I’m just offering constructive criticism.
  6. Only request if there is an open slot.

|| ENTRY FILL OUT

Fill out the below form to get a review in. I will put your review in the open slot.

Form

Title:
Author:
Genre:
Number Of Episodes:
Description:
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight):
Number of Reads:
Image of Cover (If there is one):
Link to story:
Anything else:

I think that’s all! I can’t wait to review!

Xoxo,
River


#2

Title: Video Game Champion
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Action
Number Of Episodes: 5 (ongoing)
Description: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight): Limelight
Number of Reads: 447
Image of Cover (If there is one):


Anything else: This story has minigames. If possible, can I please know if they’re easy or hard?


#3

Request accepted! Thank you so much for submitting! :smile:

(And yes :wink: )

Could you add the link to your form, sorry @kahotshot


#4

#5

I was wondering if you’d be willing to read what I have of an unpublished story that I’m working on really hard on right now just to see how I’m doing so far. It really isn’t much though, probably the first 6 or 7 minutes give or take of the first episode because I really want to make this story the best that it can be :sweat_smile:


#6

Aww of course i will,:heart:


#7

Okay, thank you so much :sparkling_heart:


#8

Of course.


#9

Title: Providence
Author: A.D. Summers
Genre: Fantasy Adventure
Number Of Episodes: not even 3 :joy:
Description (It’s kinda outdated):
“Why does God even deal with us?” I never thought I’d know his answer, until I went to that mysterious town. After all, Providence is a greater mystery than Revelation. (Limited CC?? still pending)
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight): INK
Number of Reads: 0 :stuck_out_tongue:
Of course, thank you so much for doing this, take all the time you need :sparkling_heart:
Link:


Temporary Cover:

Anything else: Pls be as honest as you can! I don’t think it’ll even take very long, haha
Oh, and I sort of, maybe have like 4 main characters in mind :x

Edit: Also, I wanted to know if you think it’d be better for me to make it a very Limited CC or no CC at all because a lot of the main characters’ traits are integral to their identity and general description.


#10

|| REVIEW FOR “VIDEO GAME CHAMPION” by @kahotshot

:green_heart: Please don’t take offense :slight_smile:


| Title:
Points: 3/5
The title is a little generic, but it fits the story very well.

| Description:
Points: 9/10
The description is very fitting and interesting!

| Cover:
Points : 8/10
The cover seems to fit well and I love the colors!

| Opening:
Points: 14 / 20
Although I like CC, it isn’t super interesting right at the beginning of the story, and doesn’t really give a kick of excitement. Maybe add a nice background too instead of black. I liked customising my enemy though!

| Characters:
Points: 14 / 15
Since there was CC, it was pretty diverse! The asian girl was so cute and pretty! I love the diversity and the character’s looks! I also liked how you could choose your gender.

| Plot:
Points : 25 / 30
You are doing a good job of plotting things out! Be sure to spice it up with twists and drama ( I already see some :wink: ) The pace is pretty nice and I think the choices are pretty cool, although I would add more and add clothing choices. I like how it is about gaming!

| Art:
Points: 15 / 20
You did a nice job with the cover, but I would like to see some more art inside the story as well as overlays! i liked the bedroom, and good job crediting everyone.

| Ending:
Points : 25/30
Ending is not bad! I would like to read the next chapter, I am excited to see what happens next!

| Length:
Points : 7/10
The first episode was a little short but not too bad! Maybe just add more choices and things :smiley:

| Overall:
This was a super cool story to read. I liked the originality and how you plotted it out! Keep on going! :wink:

Points overall : 120 / 150


#11

Title: Kotton Kandie
Author: Pretty Eri
Genre: Comedy
Number Of Episodes: 4 and working on 5
Description: Kandie’s finally free from an abusive marriage. Now it’s time for her to start anew - with a stalkerish ex-husband on her tail. Help her navigate through life. All choices matter.
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight):
Number of Reads: Unpublished
Image of Cover (If there is one):

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Link to story: Https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5532581127127040
Anything else: Nope


#12

Thank you for the review.


#13

Of course.


#14

Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Author: Briana M.
Genre: Romance
Number Of Episodes: 14 ~ONGOING~
Description: Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight): Ink
Number of Reads: 203
Image of Cover (If there is one):


Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5716365262585856
Anything else: Nope!


#15

Title: The End Is Nigh (Not Permenant)
Author: TeamFennekinYT
Genre: Action
Number Of Episodes: 2 (Right now. I just started yesterday, so episode 2 isn’t comepletely finished.)
Description:
Story Style (INK, Classic, Limelight): Limelight
Number of Reads: 0 (Not out yet XD. In total of ALL my stories: 4)
Image of Cover (If there is one):
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6627336154644480
Anything else: As you’ve seen previously, my story is not finished, nor out yet. So you might need to use the link to see it.


#16

I would love a review on my story! It would be greatly appreciated!
Name: Girl of Deception
Author: IDONTKNOW
Genre: Adventure
Episodes: 9 more coming soon
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5855942598328320 1


Thank you :heart:


#17

Thanks for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review!
Story title: Let the demon inside
Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Story style: Limelight
Readers:108
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#18

Can you please review my story!
Send me a fanmail once you read my story. :smiley:

Title of the story : Trail Of Tears
Name of the author : Cindy
Story genre : Drama/Romance
Description : A girl who goes through a lot in her life. Some days are good and some days are bad she wants to just be a normal girl that does not have to run away from her problems. CC
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548954080247808
Style : Ink
Episodes : 16

Can you please PM me the review.


#19

Title: KILL YOUR DREAMS
Author: Anna
Genre:Thriller
Number of episodes: 3
Description:Anne is killed by someone, she lives the same day again to find the killer.
Story Style: Limelight
Number of reads:20 (It was published only a week ago)
Link of Story:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4905142231891968
Anything else: I’ll be so grateful to you.
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#20

Hey I’d be super grateful for a review!
Title: The Boxer
Author: MadisonW
Number Of Episode: 1 Ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4563695446654976
Cover:


Genre: Action
Description: You are a 23 y/o boxer, You dream of being F.O.Y, but you have a road full of road blocks. Will you overcome those road blocks, and pursue your dream? Find out in The Boxer!

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